Just a friendly reminder not to worry about things like the recession and swine flu, because the meteor is coming and will get us all.

Let me know what you think of the design.

And while Im here, does anyone have a copy of the template that will work in Inkscape.

Very nice. Thanks for commenting on mine. I would suggest giving the meteor some color though. Not hte white part. The flaming part maybe. Also the guy in the front looks like he's dancing. Actually, the people don't seem that afraid but i dont know how to convey fear with stickmen so good work so far :) great start

acutally it might be good for Less is more :D well done like it



we are alllll dooomed hahaha

It took me a while to get the front guy to look like he wasn't waving.

Was thinking of making the meteor more textured/shaped, but you think that it would be better to have the coloured flame? or both?

And what do you think of the actual concept?

I think that you should try making the meteor less circular. I agree with the dancing stick man, maybe add sweat shooting out his forehead. Thanks for your remarks.

Advice for the stickmen.





You have to GREATLY dramaticize their actions so that they can be broadcast to real people as well...emotions. Elongate limbs slightly, and try to add tension to their bodies.

New version, shaped meteor, coloured flame and slightly elongated arms on the front stickman, thoughts, ideas, criticisms, all welcome.

i think the first guy doesnt look like he´s running... and if h is he is running the other way...



mmm i ike the idea but maybe you should get rid of the horizontal line, or change ir to some building shapes..just an idea

The front stickman doesn't look like he's running to me.

For the front stickman, try to lean him forward, like hes REALLY running in that direction...



The one on the far left has the best frantic looking form. He's REALLY charging and showing fear! When people run they don't keep an upright | like position, it turns more into a / looking form.

Sorry, also, I don't think the horizon line is neccesary.

Lol I just keep noticing things...



The meteor looks too...shapely...its not irregular enough. Try and keep it essentially round, but mark it up and crater it.

Ok thanks for the feedback guys, I must have done something wrong with the guy in front because I didn't actually draw him to look like he is running, he is meant to look like hes leaning back in shock looking at the meteor, holding his hand up to shade his eyes kinda thing. How do u think I could convey this?

The horizon line was originally added as an afterthought to convey the perspective, and I kind of like the way it looks on the tshirt, maybe I could change it to a city sky line or lose it completely.

I think the perspective is pretty much taken care of by what you've done with the staggering of the people in terms of size and placement.



As for the asteroid, a more oblong shape could do well. If you look up asteroids, they tend to be more oval in shape, with lots of little craters on them.

i think it would be awesome and comical if you placed a small sign in the back ground that said "WATCH OUT FOR METEORS" .. probably on the right side in small print so people would kind of have to actualy look to see it ...that would be awesome

I initially tried using a traced outline of the pokemon koffing for the meteor but I wasn't sure about any copyright infringements it could entail. The sign is a cool idea I'll have to look into it.

i also think the sign is a nice touch, that would be something funnier. The meteor is kind of weird for me. You perhaps should draw it filling it with black, and drawing the details by creating holes onto it (to see the color of tee)...ouch, my english is killing me sometimes

A few changes, added a falling rocks sign, changed the shape of the meteor, the horizon is removed and now the front stick man points at the meteor.



All suggestions and critique are welcome.

Cute! I actually quite liked the horizon though, thought it grounded the design quite nicely on the tee.. hm I still didn't quite get what the first stickman was doing till I read your explanation (haha for a sec I thought he'd hurled the sign at the meteor -_- but er that's just me). Poss just have him running? It's a bit hard to get too expressive with a simple silhouette line I guess. I like the way the design looks on the tee though overall! Nice work and looking forward to V3!

Mmm what if I put a zebra crossing underneath the running men? Would that be too much?

Keep going! it did look better with a horizon.

Great idea!

I think that the zebra crossing is too much.How about putting the hands in the head of the front stickman?. making he look like desperate or frightened..

I also think that the sign could be cooler if it has a meteor. Like a warning sign of meteors. what do you think?

I like the horizon. Keep that, in my opinion. Also, since everything else is so simple, the meteor's shape looks a bit out of place. have you tried just the circle? I like the flame though. Nice work :)

Oh, and check mine please.

Maybe you could also add some white lines or black maybe to show that a stickman's legs are shaking with fear? Or, maybe an exclamation mark over the one who's pointing at it? The exclamation mark may not work though. Just throwing ideas out there.

I do like it with the horizon better. Maybe a different color would provide a better suggestion of place? Fun start!

I think the meteor needs some pock marks on it, shaped like C or V. Also the horizon helped, that should go back on. I think having a sign for 'falling rocks' (as the meteor is a falling rock) is quite clever - shame it took me ages to get the joke!

maybe put some kind of texture or marks on the floor so the chracters arent just floating ?

realy funny now. Maybe place the meteor more at right (for make impresion that it fly in between the peoples.



please crit this and this. thanks

I like the idea of a sign warning of metiors, like it happens all the time but people are still supprised and don't know what to do



Please could you critique mine?



Celtic Tuberide

I think this is hilarious! Very humorous and simple. I like.

V4 - Exclaimation mark on the front stick man, horizon reintroduced, "falling rocks" text added to the sign.

Keep the critique coming.

I would go without the falling rocks yellow sign and just leave the triangle sign. Funny idea.

yea I agree no yellow sign

Is it the yellow or the sign you disagree with?

I actually think you could do away with the sign all together, and make the little guys even more varied in size (like make the far back guy twice as small) to give the design a sense of space.

I like the sign and the exclamation mark works good :)

I could always try make the yellow sign black and white or change the red format sign to a yellow one like This one.

Chezro, I'll try play with the perspective and see what happens but it doesn't feel like it will change much to me.

i think it would be good without the yellow sign saying falling rocks