this one was declined

so then i was like oh! this is the perfect opportunity for a DOUBLE PUN! so i added chick peas, get it?

I like this design, but the first one I thought was better

Very punny, I would just clean things up a little, maybe do a little work with shadows and you'll be on your ways. I like the additions of the chick peas.



please crit mine

http://www.threadless.com/crit/big/79975.png

hey! who says don't submit and doesn't say any reason why???

question would it be better if the chicks were like, real chicpeas? or if they were yellow?

will someone look at the versions of mine and help me please?



link

I like the idea a lot. I would have taken me a bit to guess what they where though without the title. Maybe making an empty pea pod on the back or somewhere on it would help? Course, I could just be really slow, haha.

haha thank you, I was considering the peapod, but i felt like it would detract from it, i dunno how to make it more obvious...

Maybe go with either chick peas or peacock. Meaning chick peas looking like a hen's chicks or a pea looking like a plumed peacock. I've seen the chick peas done before so you might focus on the peacock idea. Also, I think peas are pretty tough to render, yours are good but they still wind up looking like boulders or meteors. Maybe try a pea pod turned into a peacock, it might give you a better shape to work with and be easier for viewers to recognize. Cheers!



chick peas

people keep saying that they should be peacock peas, but i feel like that would detract from it, if they were peacock peas they would be pea-pea-cocks, not pea-cocks, see?



i might take quister's advice and just stick with the bigg'ns i'll have to ask some people.



i'll also yeah, need to figure a way to make them look more like peas, pea pod's a maybe..

ok, fine, i added a pea pod.

does this make it better?

I think that the pod make it.

really? oh well, thank you then, i appreciate your input :)

i got declined :( help!

I like pod idea, but I also really like the chick peas in version two. If you are going to go with pea pod you need to make the pod more detailed. maybe try using a little more color for highlights.

i'm thinking of tryna revive this an use more colors, and do it like, appropriately, we'll see

what do people think

i know this was done junkily,

man i have such a long design-to-do list