trixie had just thrown a leaner when the rain started. it wasnt till they got inside to wait it out, thats when she remembered where she had seen the tv remote.

i just realized i dont have patience for critiques - subbed.

good. i love all of your designs, but particularly this one. i sincerely hope everyone else likes it as much as me!

hahahhahaha i love ya corey



this sub makes me EXTRA happy

thanks chelly and biodiesel101! id still like to hear why 3 people dont think i should have submitted it?! - i love people who think giving a critique is just telling me not to submit it without any criticism or comments. thats where the critiques fail in my opinion, because just pushing a button isnt really giving a critique is it?

I love the colors and how this looks, but I have no idea of what's going on. What is leaner?

they were playing horseshoes when it started raining - a leaner in horseshoes is worth 2 points horseshoes and beers - perfect combination.

I see... sorry to be annoying, but why are there clowds comming from under the house?

not at all Petanca, questions are what i think the critique is for - those are supposed to be the shrubs around the house. but if you see them as clouds that works too. i like to get stories started and see where other take it...

Its a good straw poll, and if people say 'don't submit' - I admit its not helpful, but it means that either (a) people just don't like it, or (b) don't understand it, and don't care enough to want to understand it. Which means the message is unclear.



I didn't have a clue what it was all about - but beer and horseshoes sounds like fun. Any sport that doesn't involve breaking a sweat, and beer is good.

Imagine the design in isolation and pretend its the first time you've seen it. It has to work without the title, and without it, even for people who would understand 'leaner', it is a bit of a puzzle. One love!

^I agree. i like random stuff, but here you have a story you want to tell, and i think people aren't getting it, so i suggest finding a way to make people reach what you mean. The shrubs-clowds are fun but they mght be very distracting for people to understand the whole picture.

yep, i hear what you are saying

:)