Going to fill each layer of the rainbow with things. Maybe Guns? cigarettes? Money? Daggers? Sex?

Also I will change the colours, they're to bright...

I think the skulls should contrast the background a little, they kind of blend it a lot. Maybe contrast the outline as well, so the image stands out a bit more.

Also the rainbow colors are not in order. Maybe make the bones each color from what they died from if you going to put gun cig...



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I appreciate your comments Alpha Beta

nice drawings of the skeletons, but the rainbow itself looks boring and aren't the right rainbow colors, i would google rainbow colors if i were you ... maybe instead of a generic rainbow you could draw the piles of bones in the shape of a rainbow and have the colors of the rainbow overlayed, unless your idea to put other stuff inside of the rainbow makes it more interesting



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the drawing of the skeleton is great, but as mentioned by others you should change the colors of the rainbow. I like it a lot, may be with the guns, cigarettes, money, etc it would look even more interesting. keep working on it.



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Nice, I wouldn't make it too obvious that it's a rainbow of death, on a distance it should look kinda normal i would say, but when you come closer you will realize its greatness! haha. One idea is to instead of filling the rainbowlayers with stuff that causes death, you can create the rainbow strokes with these items?? if you get what I mean. I'm looking forward to see this progress

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will someone look at the versions of mine and help me please?



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I actually like this idea as it is, I wouldn't put anything in them, I think it would make the design too busy. I would make a slightly higgher contrast between skulls and shirt and adjust the rainbow colors and sub this sucker. I'd wear it.



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try add some texture at Rainbow, it may better fit with the design of deaths



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not going to comment on the rainbow yet as i know you have plans for it. skeletons looks great though, just need to be clearer/more contrasted with the shirt.

looking forward to seeing the rainbow with stuff in it - sounds like a solid idea and i can't wait to see how you interpret it!



any thoughts on the new version of my elephant please?