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nice!
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i know you like the simplicity of it and what not.. but if you really look at most of the winners, they are incredibly detailed, or a good joke to it. so you should change something (don't know what yet) but you need to do more to it.
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I kind of agree with you xoxster I just don't have a clue in what I could do. I think it has sort of a positive environmental backing to it... maybe I could work on my penmanship with the mouse lol.
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more votes please, I am not quite sure what to think with this design
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I agree with xoxtipxox, but I can't think of anything that could improve this.
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I think v1 could be good, but you almost need to add a second layer to it
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what do you mean by second layer?
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the first version is just stupid, but the second is like WOW, i really, really like it...good luck with that... no suggestions is great just the way it is...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/4299/A_Perfect_Match#lastcomment |
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are you allowed to say something like "if this shirt wins, I'll donate such and such ammount to such and such charity?" I really think this is a environmentally concious shirt and allthough its simple I think the message carries the design.
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all you needs workers and haters, what I can I do to make it better give me some actual critique so I can improve this.
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I know you hand drew "ecofriendly," but it needs to be cleaned up so it's legible. Simplicity is fine, but you have to realize that it has to look attractive to the threadless consumer.
Boxing designs is not popular, so you may want to rethink the presentation of your elements in this fashion. also, coloring in of the elements would draw the eye to the design more -- to me, it's a bit lost in all this sage green. |
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well I have 2 more colors to work with, I'll try and color them in and see what that looks like, and yeah I guess you could say that about my penmanship lol, its so hard to do cursive with a mouse.
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I just tried coloring in the different things with various colors and styles and each time it looks junky. I am lost here.
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by second layer, i mean either a shadow or an image behind.
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I'll have to think about this for a bit then
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toss me some free tips yo
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bump
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bump
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Stop bumping this, for crying into a bucket. Do something with it or let it sink.
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