I subbed this for the joy of text contest and I really like it... I want to make some improvements and resub... any suggestions?

I think there are a lot of designs on threadless that have hearts and maybe this isn't different enough from those to stand out.



I do like the way you have done the quote with the bird and splats and text though.

^-^ I like this alot, and I would buy it as is. It may not be the most original shirt out there, but it's still awesome.



I'd go ahead and submit.

I liked it a lot teh first time around dont knwo what id change on it

I think this really is a unique idea for a shirt and I would totally buy it. I think it looks good on a long-sleeved shirt, but I don't know if the heart would look as good with short sleeves.

It is a well put together design... I like the graphic, although its a heart, on the sleeve (will threadless even do that). Maybe just not my style... The whole shakespere quote is a little to queer/gothic for this shirt.

Racoon Dog on Feb 13 '07

^-^ I like this alot, and I would buy it as is. It may not be the most original shirt out there, but it's still awesome.



I'd go ahead and submit.



hahah classic

There is no way I'd wear this shirt - sorry. I don't wan't to wear hearts on my clothing... but that is because I'm dead inside.



I'm also not that keen on this kind of design, sorry, but you have plenty of supporters so I'm obviously in the minority - good luck

I don't love this, but I think it's interesting.

Based on the full shirt design, the focal ends up being the heart, because its red on black.

Your balance also feels a little off, the diagonal texts feel heavy and unnessicary. Try straightening up the background text, it will draw a little more attention, but because its already understated, I think it will work.