Hi! This is a lucky star jar and the moon is sad because it can't fit in it. Please leave comments. Thanks!

why are the stars lined up instead of merrily zooming in from all directions. how bout a 'bouncer' star pointing the moon away??

thank you so much for leaving the comment! i changed a few things from the original picture such as the moon, the bouncer, some of the stars, some more details. i would really appreciate any comments (besides it sucks) because i don't know what to improve/change ! thanks a lot.

I like the clouds and the bouncer, but I don't really like the star costume...

Maybe craters or something to make it more obvious it's a moon...

And a lot more stars!!!!

okay.. what i changed with this one..

more shadows, wherever i thought it might be needed

more stars, for the above comment

colors of the stars inside the bottle to depict that

and.. yeah.. i'm really out of ideas on what to do with this. so pleaseee leave me some suggestions!

Unfortunately, the idea behind the design is too complicated for the image to speak for itself. A simpler idea, perhaps, or something that can be conveyed visually more easily?

(this is rach) It's very cute, but I kinda didn't get it until I looked at the original. I agree with vint13 about the craters to make it more obvious that it is the moon, trying to sneak in. I like the style though, it's very cute ^-^ I feel kind of sad for the moon :(

I think is better the x2 without a lot of star everywere,



you should make the moon more like a moon, not just a circle, try adding some textures, by the way, i LUV IT



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one more try. what i changed..

new title "Stars Only"

the shape of the moon (i'm completely avoiding craters because i make them look like boogers!) and the trail of the shooting stars.

please leave comments on what i should improve, i do appreciate them!

greatly improved.... the moon is much better and I love the bouncer.



P.S. you need to count colours!!