This is something I already subbed that I want to revise. Any suggestions?

I really think its good looking. But I can't decide WHAT to interpret. Its just to abstract to really pull anything from. I can tell you this, your top right corner is the center of interest, it looks vaguely like music notes.

Its a cool style, but give it a little more umph and a little more structure and intent.

like the movement but, Yeah, too hard to pick out subject.