This is my first time in the crit. I'm scared.

Excellent!

Orange FTW! I love the idea, I think its a little hard to follow at first. Also, should the pigeon come AFTER the message in a bottle? I dunno. The colors and style is amazing per usual though!

Awesome colors!

Awesome illustration work!

This is awersome. I wonder if its worth working tweeting in there, which also opens the door for a scathing review on human condition whereby we start out with open and face to face communitcation and end up alone in a dark room 'talking' to people through indirect means.

love it no need to be in the critiques, sub it!

You nailed the concept, krokun! Thank you!



Thanks positive commenters!



And tooper, the layout is mostly fudged. Did you know the Chinese invented postal service BEFORE paper?! Crazy.



I'm working on a more grid-like layout, yall. To see compare/contrast!

I want to make love to you this design.

html fail!

This is really easy to grasp the concept of and looks fantastic so far. :) Can't wait to see the other layout option.

I think this would look great if you kept the layout shape, but just "stretched" it out some more

LOVE!

This is great! Make me wish I could think my lightning bolts out loud, too.

looks really good!



nit pick: i'd change MMIX to something more vauge, i read it mix the first time. like MMXII or something instead.

This is pure win, I'm not fond of the LOL, though, but I am of everything else.

I agree about MMIX ^^

Thank yous thank yous! I shall reconsider the message of the stone tablet.

the LOL made this kinda hard for me to follow at first, but the rest is 100% awesome

New layout possibility with added (misspelled) morse code thing and fake dates that may or may not be chronologically in order.

sign language doesn't make sense.

I liked the the previous layout better. There have been a lot of grid style layouts recently and I think the previous one is more unique.

Sign language is a form of communication just like speech, force.



That's the reason why I did a grid, ryan, most of the voters love em.

Looks good! If for some reason you needed another step in the evolution, you could use a note tied around an arrow...







AND MAKE THE ARROW HUGE!

I loved the connecting lines =(



And your sign language always makes sense.

Connecting lines = better

I love that y'all don't like the grid as much. Thank you for your inputs!

I liked the previous version with the lines and no dates better too, but either way it looks great!



crit mine please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/42088/Dead_Batteries#v3

Looks great!



You should sub it!

ha! That's so cool.



I might do something different than colliding clouds to illustrate telepathy.

never mind. It's cool.

whoah this is great!!



have you considered smoke signals?

awesome! I dig the colours and style!

I've considered smoke signals, Pony Express, tv & radio, and morse code, brett, but got lazy.

You have to draw the line somewhere. Submit!

THis is pretty much finished, subbbbbbbbbbbit

i digg it

Om my- I love the carrier pigeon. The design is wonderful, and I agree with everyone that you should submit it- but consider submitting that carrier pigeon alone, bigger, too. He's just ridiculously awesome.

Thanks you guys!



And sneg, I've considered that already- with him sitting on a perch of a birdhouse built to look like a biplane or something cool. Stay tuned!

OH good! I will

BUMP for the night crew.

Amazing work! ;D

Morning bump!

Go for it. This looks tight.

The comment madde before about the sign language not making sense could have been a bit more helpful, I think.



Perhaps this person knows sign language and is saying that doesn't actually mean "Hi" when they say it "doesn't make sense."



A funny thing about sign language is that even though in Britain and America and Australia we all speak English, the sign languages are all different. This often leads to trouble on sign-language-based subs because all sorts of "experts" start commenting that the sign language is "wrong." So quite possibly, it does mean "Hi" in one sign language, but not the one they understand.



I don't think it's terribly important but, since this isn't really a sign-language-based design. It conveys that sign language is a kind of communication, regardless of what the hands may be saying.

first time i've seen this and it's awesome.

it's a great idea and looks fantastic

sub it!



any comments on my robot please?

Your input is valid and makes sense, john, thank you for taking the time to share it!

super.
submit it already :)

Would love to know what you think of these two...
http://www.threadless.com/profile/1293145/pencil_duck/critiques

wow very nice design! can't think of any way to improve this! sub!

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

great style!

great! submit!



check out my critique
Cheater

very cool
sub

Please help me out and Critique

She did submit this. It's a fairly easy check to see if she did or not.

I don't like seeing these bumped like this.

Tagging onto what John was saying, I think that the sign language would communicate without the word "hi" underneath. Their eyebrows could also be a little more groomed in the final stage. Just to show a little more evolution. Great Shirt! Can't wait to see it voted on.

good enough , i'd say submit it
also
if you have some time I would be grateful if you scored my design octo shirt

That's AWSOME!! I Think you should submit it!!

If you have a minute score and comment my design.

cool, what r u waiting for?