Just an idea I'm starting. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks for all the great feedback so far. I totally agree that it needed more depth, maybe a background element to tie it together.



Any other comments...suggestions...anything?

New version. Lighter color.



Any suggestions? Whatsoever? Please?

man, i'm just thinking about the background halftone being bigger, so it could "blend" better all the doors.



or you could just go with a blend-tec =D

I like more the first version.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/42675/I_am_less_monster_than_you Thanks!

I like a lot, submit this one.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/41078/The_bear_who_stole_a_bank

new colors make a big difference. great improvement! i think maybe you should work on improving your layout. maybe play with the orientation of the doors. make some on larger angles maybe. thats the only suggestion i can come up with tho. everything else is well done.

hmm sorry but i can't quite make out what door no 2 and 3 are? (going clockwise) 1st one looks like a moon, 2nd one looks like a green mouse.



I love the illustration and line work is so detailed. And i'm digging the idea as i'm partial to dimensions and alternate realities kinda thing.



What if you place them in an escher-like style and have stairs going in illogical directions but somehow connecting to each other? It might help fuse your idea.



I really like the concept. I think its working and V2 colours are much better.



Can you please score my design? Thanks!

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Awesome work; feels very "Twilight Zone". I feel like there should be one more door that either looks inside the body or has just a giant eyeball behind it.

i really dig the style, and the concept is good. But something is bothering me, it's how the whole design look on a tee shirt...the elements seem to me a bit lost, in composition, there is too much empty sopaces between them. I don't know how you cuold fix it, but something more compact would be better IMO. Maybe, if you make a central "door" bigger, and, alla around, little ones...? just a thought uh.