Yes, yes, I have been suffering from an unhealthy sea creature obsession lately...

nice character you have there ... i dont like the text or the setting though ... have you thought about having him surrounded by actual mermaids, kind of a "one of these things does not belong here" scenario? i think this could work with a fleshing out of the concept



check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/submission/206229/On_Top_of_the_World



http://www.threadless.com/critique/41940/Veggies_Anonymous

a little creepy haha, how would the placement on the shirt be?



What do you think of mine? Phoenix Rising

No sea creature obsession is unhealthy. The self made text is great.



I would appreciate your vote

AAHH awesome. Love love this illustration! Tee placement?



I would love your input on my piece here.

Placement! Very traditional but I think it makes sense here.

I'd like to see the chair be some kind of shell or coral type of thing. Something from the sea. I feel the same way about the type, maybe add some scales in there.

I like the placement, But I like the chair and font just fine!



Help!

I am super-happy about the type as it is... about the chair, I know where you are coming from, but I like the nonsense of it, if I worked more on it would be to make it look like a grandma's chair...



The main point is, you like him as a character? The stinky thing is off-putting or funny?

Shirt color is nasty, and smell is off putting.



Needs better teeth too.

Badabing! Poor Fishy...

lol i like everything here, the drawing, the typo and the colors specially! (even the green tshirt)



im not sure what i'd change.. maybe the smell thing, i prefer this in v2.

Very nice :)

New colours! Also a few touch-ups.

i liked it alot! but i would buy the color on v3 for sure.

I like these colors better....very retro 50's.

I agree with laio, the colors on version 3 looks much more better.



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I really like the design, I would buy the v3 colors more though.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/42664/Rethi3nk

This would be final for presentation... or not?

The very loud t-shirt colour that I used on V3 does not actually exist in Threadless, but that could please some. I think it works well either in on both shirt colours.

Cool illustration! I liked it on the blue

I prefer the blue one

I guess I will propose both versions, it's been pretty much 50%...

please don't post your link around

Damn, sorry Staffel, that won't happen again. I really apologize for posting that link.



(wait... can I post just the very last one? I promise, it's the last:

www.gofuckyourself.com)

Not bad mate, but it still seems incomplete somehow. I do like the text 'its fishy'.

So... could work in both turquoise and gold.

nic work !

haha! think it's best on the gold!

gold for me

i think it stands out better in gold. not sure what this design is "about", though. i like the scales.

Thanks, fellas.

sumocloud, it's not really "about" anything in the usual sense of having a joke or pun or reference.

More like "here's the character, you provide the story"... might be quite a kamikaze move to submit it at Threadless, I know.

Really nicely done. Although the fish/mermaid does scare me a little haha.

Submitted! Hope it gets approved.

Thanks again.