This is a collaboration between myself and a good friend of mine who is just getting started on Threadless. Please let me know what you think!!

you need to link to a bigger version, I can't get a good enough look.

But from what I can see, I think you have too many people bones, I'm not fond of the pipes(?) and I would shorten the gap between the houses and the subway. That's just my opinion though.



It's really great so far though.

This is fantastic.



There is part of me that wishes there was something/person/animal that interacts with all of the levels somehow.



Either that or some shock of color somewhere besides (or maybe even in) the windows.



Perfect as is though.

Put some layers a bit closer to eachother.

to many people bones.

And get rid of the Thick line above the dinosaures.

Kill the blue in the windows... Because you're style here's more linework...



Good Idea, in need of some work...



have some time? I'm in need of some critique too:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/42283/Skydiving_with_death

looks good to me! I say sub! i like the idea a lot actually



would you mind checking mine if you have a chance?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/42273/Follow_Your_Heart

i like the idea lots...

the dinosaurs are my fave.. and carry the most interest for me.. so the rest looks a little boring compared to that.. but.. it looks like a great tee. and mucho potential with a little works...

-shorten gaps...

-nathanwpyle suggestion..



nice collab homies

This is a cool idea. I would like to see it in more detail. Especially the lower layers. Good work !

I love it, I think it would be cool to have someone either going down into the bottom layers kind of like Orpheus visiting the underworld or something climbing up .

it is bottom heavy w/ everything on top being outlines and everything below being solids. i really like the buildings and trains. i also like the touch of blue. maybe just find a way to bring the two sections together a bit more? anyhow, it looks pretty sweet.

very cool dude. the space between the houses/subway seems a bit too large, like jim said. although it might be awesome if you squeezed some basements in there?

Yes I agree too, move the pavement a little up. Consider the new glow inks it might look fantastic if the windows and lights come aliiiiiiiiiive :D hahaha

I like the space between the houses and the rest. I guess you could shorting up a bit but I like the emptiness.



Perhaps if you removed some human skeletons and left another small gap, the one at the top wouldn't look so big.



And for some reason the pipes above the dinosaurs work well. There needs to be a simple layer between those two detailed skeletons.





I love dinosaurs. I'm going to keep an eye on this one.

Thank you all so much for all the feedback!!! I am going to work hard on this tonight and see if i can improve on it with some of your suggestions!!

The pipes (?) above the dinosaurs puzzled me. Until I read Caddywompus' comment, I didn't know they were pipes. Water pipes go above subways - so they're accessible when they break. Surely you've seen enough roads torn up to know that.

If you put basements under the houses, that will tie the two halves together.

You could have a human buried under one of the houses for a touch of the macabre.

This is pretty good as is - it just could use a few tweaks.



Comment on mine?

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