Stink VS Fragrance, skunk Vs Flowers!

i like the dead flower. i find it a bit hard to read overall though. perhaps its a bit cluttered?
would appreciate yr thought on mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/42133/The_Impossible_Grind

WOW very nice design :D

Please comment on my Poor Teddy?

WOW! GREAT WORK!

looooks STINKY! ;P ..... is it on pink? or lavenderish ?..
id wear pink i think... probably magenta ..maybe.. ehrm.. your choice..

looks good as is i think...

This is looking good. I think you should submit it.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/42292/Vibe

Very nicely done. Check out mine:

Excaluitar!!

Awesome designing & idea.
Looks polished and ready for submission.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/42298

Looks great! took me a while to get it was a skunk, but that's just me, I'm slow on mondays...

Awesome details and I'm digging those dead flowers! Submit!

Wow.. Great concept and coloring o_O I'd say it's definitely ready for submission! (:

Critique mine

I agree with sumocloud. It's a bit hard to read. It took me a while to realize the tail WAS a tail. I kept thinking rock because it doesn't appear to be attached to the skunk.
The background is so busy, it obscures the design. If you want something that people have to stare at to figure out, you did well, but I think a bit of cleaning up will get you a higher rating in the voting.
This is great, by the way. And it's perfect on pink. I know a whole bunch of old ladies at church I would love to wear this around. Their perfume is so strong, it supplants all the oxygen for a radius of seven feet around them.

Comment on mine?
Flamingo Dancer

wow, amazing illustration.
maybe have a different tee color for boys. prob more likely a boy would wear this than a girl, and a lot of them might not wear that lilac/pink shirt. Or maybe that's just me.


are my hairy space monsters ready to sub or do they still need some work?

thanks for all the comments :) i see the problems now, i will do the amendment thanks! will be right back!

anyway it's on lavender, i just try out pink, it looks great makes the object stands out but that way i will have one extra color...

I clear up some unnecessary lines and do up 2 colors one for boys and the other for the girls, lavender and heather grey!

any comments?

looks a lot better without the background detail, but it still took me a while to get it right in my head which i think has to do with the perspective and the size of the skunks head vs it's tail.
i don't know how you would change that without comepletely changing what is an otherwise awesome illustration - you've got great style going on here and I'd be hesitatnt to suggest too many changes.
sorry, that probably wasn't much use!
any thought on my connect the dots robot

icic thanks for the comments, i guess i will just send it in! thanks!

wait wait

I just want to see the smoke from the guns a little bigger.
like the first.. just the guns though.. i mean.. you could go big with those.. since its all about the stink.. more stink.. but i put too much crap in my stuff. but just a little bigger?

It's nice, but I had a hard time figuring out what the skunk was. It might help to make the tail look more like fur? It kind of looks like a reptilian texture.

Very nice illustration. However I have to agree that it's hard to read. Maybe the tail should not be touching the ground. Hard to say

ya i think u are right, i should place more emphasize on the Stinky stinky smoke, after all it's a stinky t-shirt! haha
But seems like my perspective is giving me problem.
still appreciate the coomments totally!
I will make the amendment thanks!
(i actually send it in already, but have asked them to remove the submission hope they do it!)

hi to all, since the problem is so great, i decided to remake this design now, and before making more commitment to this design i hope to get the intial perpsective and idea right.
So the thing is we are having the skunk on top of a bed of flowers, stinking up the whole place ha. and with a huge mass of smoke before the skunk coming up behind.
is it working?

Absolutely better!

Hi to all! after almost a week of looking at this artwork ha, i still love it, so i decide to just go with kennybanzai idea of making the smoke coming out of the gun bigger :)
I think this deserve a chance rather then scraping it
Thanks all for the wonderful comments, most probably i will be going with this!

it's awesome, well done! :)

This looks really awesome! Great work, think it's ready to submit!
If you got time please crit me

Looks fantastic, amazing color choice. I wish it looked a bit furrier?

thanks for the comments!

nice.

This looks ready. Definitely submit. :]

thanks then probably it's time for sub!

sub! let's await for the voting..

holy shit this is so awesome.

awesome illustration... great use of colors
are you gonna show other shirt colors or only one proposal? great work!

my "Animals On Safari" is up for voting :-)

erm i actually only prepare one color t-shirt ops! ha
anyway thanks for the comments!

Slam this into the big times, dude. It's ready.

well, the colors you've used right now are great together!
with other shirt options you need to change the smoke colors as well....

let us know when it's up

alright sure dude!

Omg this is awesome.

critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43236/The_Storm

Lol! Submit it already! :D

Please vote for mine if you have a minute. Thanks!

thanks it's already on the way! i think a few more days... it will be up for vote :)

I love it! great job Clause

it's up for voting!

this is class!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please crit me:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/43404/Arctic_Sister

super! submit it

please crit me

Beautiful! Submit!

Feeling Stuck?
Blobs.

just sick illustration and excellent idea! i saw you sub it, for sure, a 5$ for me, even if i'm not sure about the color of tee shirt ;)

Freakin sweet as hell man.

thanks everybody!

haah im on to vote..in the mean time check mine out?

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