Quick sketch of an idea for Eagle V's Shark. You may see it as subbed because I hit the wrong button so ignore that ,have asked threadless to remove it and they are lovely people so I am sure they will :o) (fingers crossed)

In the meantime, ideas would be great! Like the concept? How do you want to see it?

Well there is Virgin and Extra Virgin Olive Oil... not Pure Virgin. I don't really understand what the Good 2 Go is supposed to be. Try to establish that in the drawing maybe with some colors? I will come back for Version 2!!!

''Good 2 Go' is just a little word play on H2O. It just has that sort of same rhythm about the sound when you say it out loud. Plus he's a little bit of a letch, which I need to develop more in the pic. You are totaly right about 'Pure Virgin'...'Extra Virgin' works much better so thanks for that. This really was a two minute sketch, just wanted to get the basic idea in and get some thoughts...yours have been helpful. Thanks!

''Good 2 Go' is just a little word play on H2O. It just has that sort of same rhythm about the sound when you say it out loud. Plus he's a little bit of a letch, which I need to develop more in the pic. You are totaly right about 'Pure Virgin'...'Extra Virgin' works much better so thanks for that. This really was a two minute sketch, just wanted to get the basic idea in and get some thoughts...yours have been helpful. Thanks!

I don't know that many people will make the connection between "good to go" and H2O.

Placement of the words help maybe? I know I need to work on this. Maybe a bit too obscure? It seemed to make sense to me at the time, but hey, that's why I've put it here.

I think that it's a good idea, and I look forward to seeing a different version. I agree with what was said above. Change the name of the olive oil, and play around with the placement of the Good 2 go. Perhaps spoof off of an already existant water label?

Thanks really usefull comments! I have a bit of a vision in my head for this and will def get to work on it. Might be a few days in the making though - paying work about to get in the way :o)

make it vinegar. I have always heard oil and vinegar, and that may be easier to distinguish.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/4218/Op_Art

That will negate the point that 'oil and water don't mix'. Don't you think?

Mistakingly put V2 up as a separate post so please make your comments on that one, sorry,



http://www.threadless.com/critique/4244/Extra_Virgin_don_t_mix_Awkward_Love