I cleaned some of the lines up, added the fish [this one was drawn in photoshop, but I actually hand drew one that I will put in later so that it looks more uniform with the lines and whatnot], and took out the background color (which would have been the shirt).
I'm thinking about some other things to add or change, but I'll see what yinz have to say for now.
I think once/if I sub this I will change the title to something like "food fight." Unoriginal, yes, but you sort of get the idea more (that they are fighting over the fish, not just being weird stylized animals).
I prefer the placement with part of the fox going onto the back, and I think I would either go with the maroon or teal.
Okay I added some shirt colors with specific positions, but I still prefer the placement with the fox running onto the back of the shirt with pretty much any of the colors.
I cleaned up the ears a little bit on the cat as well.
i kind of like v1 the best as well. it looks painted... or something...
and i really hate when people want you to like drastically change your idea, but... if you either flipped the fox or the cat, it might fit "stream of Consciousness" better. it would be like they were chasing each other...
I don't mind, my original idea was to have a bunch of stylized animals sort of forming the vague teardrop shape or something, but I turned out to be too lazy to do that without a scanner.
When I subbed it, I called it "food fight," as that was more fitting in its current state. Anyway, I will definitely look into what you said, the jorge, and thanks for commenting!
I think I might add a fish in between them or something.
The whole design process is rather confusing!