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bad_nobe
   bad_nobe on Jun 13 '07
come and join the party.
bad_nobe
   bad_nobe on Jun 13 '07
help.
bad_nobe
   bad_nobe on Jun 13 '07
help.
whatarebirds
whatarebirds on Jun 13 '07
Cute! Can you add shading without exceeding the colour limit? Maybe work on some bodily detail a little too (the guy sliding out of the plane has a curved body).



I think there are too many elements. You don't need the waterskiier and speed boat. I like the island and windsurfer - but they are probably unnecessary for the main joke, and distract from it. They also don't really fit with the "party on the plane crash" theme. Same with the shark.
magaggles
magaggles on Jun 13 '07
take off the $5 me, some people do the opposite of what they're told :|
cgudan
cgudan on Jun 13 '07
great idea. i agree, a little too much. take out the speedboat.
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biotwist
   biotwist on Nov 01 '08
how is that guy surfing with no wave?
biotwist
   biotwist on Nov 01 '08
maybe of the plane also looked like it crashed? smoking turbine? cracked hull?

anyhow mind giving me some advice on this?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30845/Whoyaganacallclicky
biotwist
   biotwist on Nov 01 '08
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