was told that this drawing would look cool on a shirt and that i should make a threadless account.



so what do you think?

It's kinda silly, in a good way. I would personally like to see the bananas smaller and more centered on the chest with the words underneath them. Just an idea, also maybe a little shading on the bananas heads.



please critique mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/39801/Swing_axe

Hahahaha, i get it!

Hahaha, great!

cool idea, yes, it would look cool on a tee, you need to work.

Work on the typo.

The bananas are cool! I think they need texture, work on his faces and hands

I adore their clothes, the shadows looks good

i love this, just keep working!

Please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/41052/The_pig_eon

Thanks a lot!

hey thanks!



I'll try that, id love to add shading but i cant use any more colours on it.

was told that this drawing would look cool on a shirt and that i should make a threadless account.





so what do you think?



update:



Cleaned them up and decided to remove the text!

suggestions? :D

Print.

Awesome, maybe add some shadows of the bananas?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/48814/Keyboards

i like this. new idea. I like how they lean



I'd appreciate it

Yeah I think some shadows would ground the design pretty well