Leonard Nimoy + a mountainous rock = VULCANo

I love the idea but it needs some... I don't know, it looks kind of rough and the smoke looks goofy.

I thought the simplicity made it look better, Leonard Nimoy would have wanted it that way.

You've got 5 "Don't Submits" - people are giving you advice. Don't blow it off.



Threadless are not going to print it in this rough form.

they aren't giving me any advice, 8 people have voted to not submit but only 1 jesusgirl has offered actual critqiue on how I can better this idea.

What jesusgirl said is advice, and you blew it off. It is rough and the smoke looks goofy. Make it less rough, and make the smoke look less goofy.



Saying you think it looks better this way when you have asked for critique and when you have 8 people voting don't submit is pigheaded.

tight, but anyways...



If I cleaned up the linework, and changed up the smoke would that be a start? I love this idea and maybe it's because I've seen a star trek episode but I feel as though the character is recognizable in it's simplicity.

v2

I like v1 better. :(

The smoke looks better, but is that a snow scraper growing out of Spock's head?