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chekk mine out!!

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Please don't leave links to your Critiques on people's designs up for scoring, it's not good threadiquette.

i like the colors & the image in the middle

check out mine

You really need to stop lesving your generic link on people's subs. Like, right now. That's not what the comments section on people's designs are for. It's rude and shows a complete lack of respect.

it's cool, but I'm not sure I dig the plastic wrap look.

I'd rather you didn't use all the embosses and filters. A flat vector image would work much better!

I agree. The design you have is pretty cool, but the emboss filter makes it look too photoshopped I might lose that and play around with colors a bit.

Look, while leaving a link to a critique on another critique may be acceptable (whereas leaving one on a design is a definite no-no) what you're doing here is just plain wrong. It's quite obvious you're just copy/pasting your link on other people's work and that's just as disrespectful. I'm sure you expect people to give advice on your critique, but if you're not prepared to give advice, why should they do what you're not prepapred to do? Being in a community like Threadless means actively participating in the community, not trying to attract all the attention for yourself. Please consider people's work and leave a comment that shows you've put some thought into it, they've put a lot of energy into creating it and need advice to continue. You'll get back what you put in. Give and you shall receive. Karma. etc

PLEASE LISTEN TO SJ.



Someone who spams submissions during scoring will almost always bring horrible things on him/herself and his submission. It is one of the worst things you can do on T'less. Please.

I think the effect on the image is ok, but it needs to be taken off the t-shirt itself. I would think about making the design another color instead of just Black. Maybe a dark red or something like that.

What suggestions do you have for my design?

I really like the design but agree with some of the other comments that the embossing is unnecessary. I think just flat color would be fine.

I agree the art should be flat and not embossed.

The design is interesting but I would like to see a variety of colors of the tee and maybe of the design it's self.

Deep blue design on white / or the design in a Brown tone on a lightGrey or the design on a black tee with the design in white for high contrast.



Nice Work

Js ^_^

COOL

zero for all your spamming on other peoples design comments section.

Yea, dont like your desisgn, if it sucks that much ass.

I abs. hate the plastic wrap filter u got goin on there.



I think its an interesting illustration, but needs like a turq. border, @least on that cream background..

Definitely no photoshop plastic wrap filter!!

Nice work!

the plastic look makes your tshirt look kinda weird.. you should get rid of em.



Check mine out :)

i like the color

look at my design

Not bad, what's it about.



Check mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/42313/Recycling#lastcomment

third version hit me up with some feed back thanks

This is getting really good. You might experiment with a faded image in the background to create the illusion of flight.

check out my last design

Yes. step in the right direction for sure. much improved over v2 :) something you could try is vary the shades on the feathers more so that the shadow doesn't hit so suddenly. Cheers :)



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Hello there.. Hm, this is definitely an improvement compared to the previous versions. (:

it's defenitly an intresting design. it is getting better but you should add more detail to the feathers so as to match the eye. prehaps also make it bigger

this looks cool. Maybe since you already have the black and white on it, you could make it like the ying yang sign. that would definately send a message.

i know you've started with the eye, but do you still need it? positioning the two birds like this gives you the opportunity to add more deatil and maybe use them as a yingyang symbol. you're heading in that direction when you changed the colors on the birds i think... could be interesting to look into.



my Office Rodents are up for voting :-)

i agree with mtths, the birds look mint though :)

Definitely getting there. Nice improvement over the other versions.

WOW. O__O I really really adore your design. I have seen the previous versions, and I must admit, you have improved a very long way. Although there is one suggestion I would like to make :) Maybe you could invert the colors, like the ying-yang symbol. I think it would look lovely :D

fourth one

the white one has more dimension, which is favorable. what if the black one was grey with black outlines?



I would appreciate your vote on my design too, thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/207639/Your_Inner_Animal

i agree with hatestheyanks. try a dark grey with black outlines, to make it pop a little more.



Check mine out if you get the chance please. Thanks!