You really need to stop lesving your generic link on people's subs. Like, right now. That's not what the comments section on people's designs are for. It's rude and shows a complete lack of respect.
Look, while leaving a link to a critique on another critique may be acceptable (whereas leaving one on a design is a definite no-no) what you're doing here is just plain wrong. It's quite obvious you're just copy/pasting your link on other people's work and that's just as disrespectful. I'm sure you expect people to give advice on your critique, but if you're not prepared to give advice, why should they do what you're not prepapred to do? Being in a community like Threadless means actively participating in the community, not trying to attract all the attention for yourself. Please consider people's work and leave a comment that shows you've put some thought into it, they've put a lot of energy into creating it and need advice to continue. You'll get back what you put in. Give and you shall receive. Karma. etc
Someone who spams submissions during scoring will almost always bring horrible things on him/herself and his submission. It is one of the worst things you can do on T'less. Please.
I think the effect on the image is ok, but it needs to be taken off the t-shirt itself. I would think about making the design another color instead of just Black. Maybe a dark red or something like that.
Yes. step in the right direction for sure. much improved over v2 :) something you could try is vary the shades on the feathers more so that the shadow doesn't hit so suddenly. Cheers :)
it's defenitly an intresting design. it is getting better but you should add more detail to the feathers so as to match the eye. prehaps also make it bigger
this looks cool. Maybe since you already have the black and white on it, you could make it like the ying yang sign. that would definately send a message.
i know you've started with the eye, but do you still need it? positioning the two birds like this gives you the opportunity to add more deatil and maybe use them as a yingyang symbol. you're heading in that direction when you changed the colors on the birds i think... could be interesting to look into.
WOW. O__O I really really adore your design. I have seen the previous versions, and I must admit, you have improved a very long way. Although there is one suggestion I would like to make :) Maybe you could invert the colors, like the ying-yang symbol. I think it would look lovely :D
chekk mine out!!
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