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Papaprime
   Papaprime on Apr 10 '09
common house pet totem pole.
TheInfamousBaka
TheInfamousBaka on Apr 10 '09
The simplicity of this is great. :)
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Apr 10 '09
Is everyone good on the simplicity?



Totems are commonly much more intricate, so I knew this was going against that aesthetic.
theevidenceisme
theevidenceisme on Apr 10 '09
perfect ... submit



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atzh
atzh on Apr 10 '09
I think it needs a couple more wings in between. But it looks awesome as it is. I think its ready for sub :)



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Papaprime
   Papaprime on Apr 10 '09
bump

Bluelunar
Bluelunar on Apr 10 '09
It's great but I agree with atzh, things need to stretch out more, maybe the cat's ears and the mouses arms.



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Huskeyman
Huskeyman on Apr 10 '09
i think the simplicity of it is your own style and it looks great to me. the color choice is good too, idk think there's much if anything i'd change. its very clean and neat and the line work is great.



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quister
   quister on Apr 10 '09
Great idea! Maybe the rabbit with ears upward on top and parrot below it so it doesn't become too top heavy. The dog could be fatter to create some curvature, most totems have that. Anyway, great concept. looking forward to the next V. Cheers!



rabbit top parrot below thought
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Apr 10 '09
I'm currently redrawing it, I'll keep the simplistic angle for the most part, but I'm a little to bothered by the lack of totem aesthetic, so I'm retooling it all.
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