A typical Internaut Sweatshop, where little itsy bitsy Internaut's are forced to piece together digital products for the consumer. Most of these poor little guys work 24 hours a day with little to no pay.

I'm debating whether or not to change the text to "Internaut Sweatshop"

If you make a critique could you tell me why you hate it or why you like it? I hate these random criqtiques that do nothing for me.

or would the text "Internet workshop" be better?

and then have like the made in Internet tag somewhere else? Sorry for all of the posts, I keep having additional ideas 10 minutes down the road and don't know hoe to edit existing posts.

updated version

I can tell you that first off people hate on text. Maybe try to put it on a hanging sign or something or just add more to the image to show what the text was trying to explain.



Play with what the characters are doing as apposed to stick hands coming towards non descript objects, nothing about that says "the internet" to me. Thats the aspect that needs the most improvement, the image telling more of the story then the text.



Feedback appreciated:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/4007/What_was_that_sound

http://www.threadless.com/critique/4157/Listen_to_the_voices

m.s paint is capable of so much more then stick figures.

It makes no sense. The design lacks cohesion and artistic merit. The idea needs to be more clever.



Refine the idea before drawing more, or think of something else to submit.

I prefere the first but i thing it need work... maybe it's too simple !!!



http://www.vitevitevite.ca/cgi-bin/recherche/index.cgi

version 3

I took my old idea and fixed it up a bit, what do you think with version 4?

Still not entirely sure what's happening. Art needs work.

the modems are having sex... electronically. Rofl... yeah I don't have a real clue on whats going on in this but I love the look, I would want a tshirt of this.

You could say that they are "cybering"

my friend said v4 looks like the future of strip joints, like in star wars time.

salvagable?