Not really going to make many changes. Just wanted to know what you guys think before subbing or if something here is drastically wrong.

I don't really get what's happening here. It makes no sense without the title, and isn't visually appealing enough to stand alone.

the text seems a bit disjointed from the image for the overall composition

HATE IT!

are you just lashing out at me because of that comment?

BEGIN RANT: What is with all these noobs recently who post their subs in critique and then last out when people don't fawn all over their design or point out that the "fruit of their imagination" was actually stolen off another t-shirt design website? If you want unconditional adoration, get a dog or show your "art" to the grand 'rents -- but if you truly want to develop your design skills, open your ears and take the tips offered to you by people who like to share their love of design with others.



THREADLESS IS NOT A SHRINK'S OFFICE OR A SUBSTITUTE WET NURSE BECAUSE YOU WEREN'T BREASTFED AS A CHILD. IT IS A BUSINESS THAT PRIDES ITSELF ON PROMOTING GREAT DESIGN -- NOT HALF-BAKED, POORLY EXECUTED GARBAGE. And no, I don't believe everyone who can draw is actually an artist. I have a portfolio of drawings that I have done over the years, but I have the common sense to know that my art = educational or cathartic exercises, and not art that speaks to or challenges society. END RANT.



I'm sorry travioli that I hijacked your critique for that, but as Marvin Gaye once sang, "Make Me Wanna Holler/The way they do my life!"



I think components of this design might fit into an idea I had about a t-shirt design based on Yeat's "The Second Coming." The title of your design reminded me of the poem because the last lines are "...what rough beast, its hour come round at last, Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born?"



You may or may not know this, but the word "bedlam" comes from Bethlehem Royal Hospital, the first insane asylum established in the world. I could go into more detail with you if you're interested -- just let me know!

im interested fouchnickens...



...the design is cool, not mu cup of tea but i think it should fare well

btw, love the title

fouchnickens ftw!



This is cool trav! If anything I'd go even more over the top, it's kinda empty to be saying "crazy" just yet IMO!

that's very interesting.

I personally love it. And it totally looks cool without the title. Awesome. Awesome. I like the blue one.

I really like this one as well but the evil pacman thingy is hard to see in the black version

The colors look great! I agree with tobasco, you could go a little crazier.

I like the concept, but as tobasco said, it needs more crazy. Also, I think the style of the skull doesn't really match that of the rest of the drawing. I like this though.

i think fouchnickens just wanted to show everyone he's read a poem.



Oddly enough, I've read that poem too... His name is Yeats, not Yeat... and what does the design posted here have ANYTHING to do with the last line?



I think a cool title would be "Things Fall Apart", which is an excerpt from that poem that was an inspiration for a book by the same title.