Going for a harsh wood cut kind of aesthetic... Some things i think i need to work on...



-make guy look more like a business man...

-make it more evident that the little guys are living in poor circumstances...

- have some run down buildings in the background.

-overall more detail...



Any more suggestions would be wicked...

Placement?

Poverty not clear.

flag on body for dramatic irony?

Person on the side, harboring money?

good idea nonetheless.



Critique mine once you get the chance.

i agree with maybe having some rundown buildings in the back that would definitely add to the idea of poverty ... i would also like to see placement and the face on the big guy is a little awkward to make out .... more businessman like it also a good idea ... what color tee are you thinking about? i definitely think this is a great start



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www.threadless.com/critique/41157/On_Top_of_the_World

i like this. u shld put in some fragments scattered around the place.



some help plz

yeah i can't tell what or who that big thing is supposed to be....



or what the stuff coming out of him is....gold?



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I like it a lot! don't make it too obvious.. And I like the minimalistic composition, without any ornaments, although I know this opinion may not be shared by others.



Any comment on my tees?

Pollution

Is ther life on Mars?



Thanks!! :-)

any suggestions to make this more cohesive would be appreciated...



the idea is that the community has risen up and slayed the super rich man and is sharing the profits between themselves...



what should the little people be doing?

hmm, i think it was better without the fists in the background. I think that it is a good idea to have them gather the coins like they already are. I still didn't understand who the big guy was until i read your description. maybe have a dollar sign or something on him to signify that he represents the super wealthy.



Have a whale of a time, go to the ORCAstra!

Make him look less like the Quaker Oats guy and more like Henry Kissinger

Hmm, I'm not sure the sentiment matches the site, to be honest. With a heavy dose of irony, it could work better, but I'm not sure what to suggest.... 'revolution' is tricky, and not my forte....



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