Let's be honest, when it comes to relationships, there's one thing that can be quite the third wheel. Dishonesty? No. The girlfriend having a male best friend? Nope. I'm talking about computer games.

I have a few questions:



1) should I keep the shadow?

2) do you like the t-shirt color

3) is the placement of the two people good?

4) font?

bumppp

shadow looks weird cos they dont seem to connect with the object thats giving it. And i would scrap the text.

1. i dont think the shadow is necessary

2. the drawing leaves a little to be desired, but a decent idea

3. i think they are little too close to the edge of the tee, i would bring them in even if they overlap a little

4. pick a new font or even lose it altogether, the girl with her hand on her hip gets the point across, not so much the guy on the other



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Delete the shadow, the other character doesn't have it.

The background colour is too strong.

the placement is good, what I don't like much is the font on the bubble, maybe a script one would be fresher.



Any comment on my tees?

Pollution

Is ther life on Mars?



Thanks!! :-)

looks like the desk is floating....get rid of that ugly shadow...



and the coloring is flat....



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i like the color being flat :(