first impression?

huh?



well.... that was my first impression.

same here. what's going on?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/40558/Lime_Light#v6

is tankbusters slang for something? i like the colors and the tank without the lady.



Critique if so inclined, plz. Danke!

I LOVE IT!! I love the illustration... although I am not sure if your saying a 'sexy woman' can distract the tank... or what.. but i think its a super great illustration - love the colors!!





I don't know how to make a link to mine... thats why i just asked to look... i"m not so computer smart sometimes!! HAHAHA

I love the idea. I say lose the text and you'll lose some of the confusion. Also, either move the design up or down on the shirt...it's a bit unnatural feeling where it currently sits. And since everone else is linking...if you wouldn't mind scoring mine...

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i love everything except the lady :)

Reminds me of the newgrounds.com logo



Very cool!!

the woman has a really beefy leg?

I reckon lose the text and finish off the bottom of the picture- kinda looks unfinished. I like the idea though.

it's just a first idea... I will work on it after I finally get finished the other one

Comments on a new approach?

Let me put it straight. You like the tank and you like the birds =)



comments?

That's nice, very expressive. Better than former version.

You could make some sort of a tree and floor to integrate both images together.



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Is there life on Mars?

An another one with different proportions ;-)

what about the idea in general?

Nop, the birds have to be small. the proportion on the former one was working very well... Now the tank is a toy and the bird is a hen! ;-)

it feels empty...maybe it's the way the ground is so flat below the tank.......i don't know...it just looks dead...there's no action...



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it's still far from being ready anyway... just plumbing the possibilities

good start, but i can't think of any ways to make it better

^ryder Agree. I thought there was a flaw with the page display when it loaded because of how sharp the ground under the tank cuts off. Also, it might just be me, but I find the orange on light blue a bit hard to look at. You have some nice block shading work on that tank, but I'm just thinking; ow! my eyes!

don't change the colors! i think they're fun and make the design stand out. the porportions were better before. And I agree, it'll look much much better if you finish the ground around the tank.

Nice design and colors, but the bottom it's too empty... maybe try to add some ground or more leaves in the foreground... not really sure though.

i like the idea, great colors too. i'd just add a little to fill up a bit more of the shirt.