colors, concept, style...somethings missing?

tell anything please

The concept is funny but I think something is wrong with the face. You've made the character very cartoonish, but the rest of the figure is more realistic and proportional. I suggest making both face and body the same style.

great! i love it!

i do that īcause itīs a funny concept...but i get your point...ill try something here

thanks

great, love the drawing and the colours work well

i took off that cartoon smile and change the shirt color to a darker one...this is better? wich one you preffer?

the message itīs sitll fine?

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nice stuff

I like the 1st version, with the smile.

well...i gess that with the smile looks more comic, even if the rest of the image its more realistc, the concept its like a fun stuff

thanks peolpe...help me a lot