Let me know How it looks. If I need to make him look more like Freud, etc.

Um... been done.

Freudian Slip

Freudian Slip

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Ride the Storm

They never got submitted or turned into shirts.

and I didn't see them until today. :-\

I moved his feet around and made them a bit more proportional.

I'm considering putting in text in a thought bubble saying "Mein Mutter" or "Mother" or something of the sort

have him fall on his mother, ripping her clothes off in the process or something. or have him getting drunk at a bar looking at his mother in a dirty way. this pun's been done as is

Haha. good one! Some motion lines might be nice.



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Denzel, WA

i like this idea, but is there anyway to make it more clear that it is freud? i think motion lines would also be good.



Please crit!!

he should be shouting 'mutha fukka!!!' as he falls

Somebody already beat you to

it.



And somebody had already beat them to it.

awww shame. well, i wasn't gonna say but Gary Larson already bet THEM to it in about 1991.

Pretty funny concept, but the linework needs some work. The banana stands out too much, and the consistency in the lines kinda bothers me, I like the brush tool because it varies it up a little bit.



Oh and a bummer that the idea had already been done.. twice :c



and uhh everybody keeps linking to their critique in their comments.. so I guess I'll do the same

If the shirt never made it to print, does that mean that someone has done it before?

no, has i undestood it, it means that you didn't get enough on the voting (there were "X" tees that were voted with more points than yours), neither "saved by the owners of the website"

About the tee, i agree on the idea of him falling on his mother



Also, Rubik Robots - Unsolved Vs Solved is almost ready for submission. Any last opinions? :)

ok. the other shirts never made it to print, I didn't steal the idea, just had the same one. but I'm wondering if i should keep it in the "running"

changed his mouth a bit, added some motion line, dropped down the color of the banana, and added in a shadow. Still not sure about putting in his mother, but might still add text saying "mother" or something along those lines. I hope this design gets pushed through to printing unlike the other versions of this idea.

I'm sure someone else said this to you earlier, but it still is not obvious that its Freud. Just my two cents on the artwork :)

P.S. -- Let me know what you think of my work Thanks!

haha pretty funny. i'd make his skin tone alittle lighter.

fixed the face, changed some of the line consistencies and brought up the color of the face. added a couple details here and there.

I think maybe you could add some cartoon "ouch" effect. like you see in comic books (like zig zags, lines, added with words, etc.) Maybe you can have him saying "Oof!" or something like that.

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A Glimpse From Below

fixed the face, changed some of the line consistencies and brought up the color of the face. added a couple details here and there. and changed the shoe sole color

minor detail in the back hand

it's nice the way it is i think...

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As i think it was mentioned before there have been multiple submissions almost identical to this one, you should probably rework it considerably, make the slip totally different, or people will surely bring it up when it's scoring. Just trying to be helpful

Trying to make a better presentation

with understanding that the other similar designs never made it, I think I'm done and will be submitting it soon.

yep, good luck at the subs, usually similar designs don't do that well =/

thanks for the heads up

going along with the crowd, it needs a symbol of freud. maybe a book flying in the air titled "interpretations of dreams" or just "dreams" by S.F. or somthing along those lines. hope this helps!



My design is up for scoring, Help Me Out Please!

well for me when i first think of Freud i think of English, of which all i can remember is the "Id, Ego and Super Ego"



I think you can make ur design 'stand out' by adding a subtle/smart way of showing that it is definitely Freud.



maybe have a look at wikipedia for an idea? Sigmund Freud