The phoenix looking bird thing in this is a logo i created for a couple of my friend's band called Adimaru. I liked the design and thought id try and turn it into a t shirt.
this is great! i think if the wings went up further on the shoulders it would be perfect. right now it looks just a little stopped...but well on its way to greatness!
It's tight. I like the hint of the blue. when you have it going off the shirt.. are you expecting it to wrap around? i like it, but it's not a style that does great on here. we'll se though.
If your name's Zac White, for lord sake's, please remove that signature name from the bottom right. If it isn't, please remove it anyway. Putting a person's name there sort of implies ownership for them, and runs the risk of alienating anyone who isn't that person. The drawing's quit nice, but if my printing knowledge is right, you shouldn't have more than one colour going across the sleeves with beltprinting, I think it complicates matters too much...
new version, tried to use some of your guys ideas in it.
Ya the only reason i put my name in it before is because i felt it was a little blank for some reason and needed something in it to give it a little change.
