I like the concept alot. I think its a little hard too see. I didn't get the "talent comes from the heart" until I read your caption. Its hard to tell that your looking at a heart at first. But the concept is great. If you just tweak it I think it would make an awsome design.
lol, ya it is pretty difficult to see at times but i like doing that. For some reason i think people see it and it makes them want to look at it more and try and figure it out.
i did this design a long time ago for a website that was supposed to be called talent gaming but i love the design.