Looking for some input on this. Should I add some shading? How are my colors?

it's tough to read the writing

I like the colors, I think you might want to pick something darker for text so it stands out on the tan shirt. Maybe like a maroon or blood red type thing?

A shade of red for the font that should stand out a little better.

Bump. The hollow eyes are kinda bugging me. Suggestions?

This design makes my heart smile. I think the dreamer's color needs to be different enough, so that it does not blend to easily into the green. The text does indeed need to be of a higher contrast.



Is this intended for a hoodie? If not, then I don't think the "one day..." is needed. Or, perhaps, another location? They seem to be too close.



If it is for hoodies, you could do some cute stuff with the hood. Some subtle stars (but that might subtract from the metaphor of it all).



I really do like this. :)

Thanks :) It is intended for their zip-up hoodies. I just realized that my hoodie outline may look a little weird/abstract to others since I left it unfinished.



I'll try some different colors for the guy that would be a bit farther from the green, and maybe trying to change the green instead of the blue. Do you think the v2 font color is still not contrasting enough?

Also, hollow eyes are bothering me so much. It adds to his "spaciness".

aren't... they aren't bothering me.



Please ignore my poor grammar and spelling.

yeah I think the concept works great on a zip up hoodie. I don't knoq maybe giving the text an outline would do the trick.



the hollow eye are fine. it's hard to explain objectively but it adds a sense of innocence to roundy mclonglegs.

Well, it could go either way. The text could be faint enough that people don't notice it at first, and when they do see it, they'll be all, "Oh, that's exactly what I was thinking when I saw his cute face ^_^". If that's what your going for, than V1 is better.

Alrighty, third version in a few minutes. Different colored planet and some stars for near the text/hoodie placement.

New color for the planet, stars could go near the text or on the hoodie/sleeve/back shoulder placement.



I left the stars kinda goofy and imperfect, I think they look better that way.

yeah, i like the stars too. but they're kind of distracting right under the letters - maybe move them to the side a little? but otherwise, it's a really cute design, and i like it a lot.

Well... now the yellow seems like TOO high of a contrast. It's taking over, because it doesn't have the pastel look of the other colors. I like the stars, but I think they'd have more of an effect "hidden" somewhere.

yeah I liked v2 better, but it's your design. I like the lighter yellow in there, but the green one is too much

Alright, I feel good about this one. Added a couple more star variants, and as it says they could be placed elsewhere. Inverted the colors I was using for the planet to soften it up a bit.

Oh, yes. Very nice. I'd buy it.

One last bump. I think I'm going to go with this one, if nobody notices something glaringly wrong with it. J'dig?

Okay, guess something happened to my comment. Thanks to a friend for showing me how nice the white text looks, I think it fits better overall.

I liked the stars being a part of the image, white text is pretty good too.



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I'm all smiley inside. Lovely, really lovely.

ohhhh that's so cute!!! the white text was a good call :) precious.

Oooh, I like!! What would it look like with some very subtle shading?