sooooo what do you think?

Weirdly intriguing...



I think this would work better if the conversation were occurring between two human "parasites" inside the eel-thingy.

more comments please

The "I'm makin' pancakes honey" is really bothering me. Hand written is fine but clean it up please. Other than that it's interesting and I think I like it.

sooooooooo....?

kind of reminds me of this http://www.threadless.com/submission/118132/Living_within_the_living

much better

I was thinking the same thing as aviatrix.

so you think i dont need to send it in?

i like this a lot better than living within the living. it cracks me up that she calls him 'honey' as if they're a married couple or something. :)



my one, teeny tiny problem is that the pancake doesn't look very pancakey. i know it would be difficult to really change anything what with the style and positioning and so on, but daym, that thing is as thick as her arm! you can ignore me, i love this design.

thanks alote ! /\

sooo i need to send it in or not?!

im confused

?!

It's kinda cool, I prefer the other one, but since it's between the woman and the fish-whale-thing it's different enough I suppose. Send it in if you think you're done with critiques.

I dont really like the way the womans speech bubble is placed.. id look at alternatives for that



Feedback appreciated:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/4007/What_was_that_sound

http://www.threadless.com/critique/4157/Listen_to_the_voices

SUBMIT!

Submit this !!!



I like your style !!!



... see mine : http://www.threadless.com/critique/4166/Life_is_unFair

Submit this !!!



I like your style !!!



... see mine : http://www.threadless.com/critique/4166/Life_is_unFair

thank i think i will submit this