This is my first submission. Please give feed back.

Its only at sketch stage- I just want to get feed back

on the idea before I go ahead

Maybe put some music quote near the bird's mouth to show a singing bird.

What's with the model in the back?

love the idea ... but needs to be illustrated and colored carefully ,for the idea to stand up ..

Plz score …

Turn me on

plz critique my designs ...

Who is he

lonely finger

Tie shirt

Best bunny I have ever seen. I think the proportion can be better. you have got really nice illustration style. Can't wait to see more!

really nice! ;)

i really like the sketch keep going with it..

please crit mine if you have time

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40504/seeing_double

This is lovely!



I think with some good colours, this piece will really take off (excuse the pun). I love the big eyes - the bunny is so cute.



I look forward to seeing your next installment!!! :D



...Hey can you take a look at mine too? Its: Critique: Gaia’s Autumn

Thank you all- that helps me a lot.

(I just got slammed with a lot of work

to do at work so it might take a while for me

to get more done on this) but thanks for the

encouratement.