for the current Eagle versus Shark competition

sweet drawing mr bowie

I agree sweet illustration and style, the splattered paint/stars effect is great.

thanks guys!

definitely awesome. submit it!

merci

I thought I had 'pushed this version into the running'?

Shouldn't this critiquesblog dissapear then?

the thumbnail doesn't pop up either under my designs in my profile..

weird.

GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! n print!...good luck, yaa! :D

beautifull illustration! :D

but harpo25, i think if you can do something on the gree grass land part will be more awesome, cos right now I saw the land shape quite strange on tee! :D

that's really awesome. I'd wear it.

:O



i am seriously doing that with my mouth right now...

this is so good it's going to make me cry!

nice design but may be change the placement rather than bottom of tees...

did he sub this?

if not i have some suggestionssss

that is not sub yet... I think so

I think so too!



harpo25?

but he says he "pushed this version into the running"

ohh may be but you can give your suggestion if helps in design comments...

I love to see him to do something on the placement of the green land part... harpo25? :D

that is what I want to too..

You'd never have to worry about dandruff with this shirt.

harp

the crit doesn't disappear when you sub



you can delete the crit tho



look'n good!

thanks for all the comments!

sorry I was asleep :)



stil don't know if I have submitted this already or not

ifnot I'll see what changes I could still make.

I'd like to see the design somewhere else on the shirt. But that's just me talkin'

sure but where/how?

Maybe you could make it larger, or put it more to one side or the other, instead of centered.

yeah

good idea

maybe enlarge so the bottom part of the tee is totally filled with grass

yeah, sounds good

can't even remember why I made that grasshill haha.

So field of grass( bottom half or more higher on tee?) with the characters left or rightish on the tee?

My idea is do not enlarge whole design and move the grass land right or left side and make it bigger too..



But do not increase height of the grass land...and may be decrease it whatever it is now.

I would leave it near the bottom, and just enlarge it (the grass/dragon/boy) so that it takes up more space and put it further right, if that makes sense.

whatever you do but make sure not to cover tees space more than 1/4.

good points!

i was gonna say move it up on the shirt, and make the tee color green.

eliminate all the stars...



that's my idea but this also looks great.

and obviously add more grass in the background, if you do that

i wouldn't eliminate the stars

I did dumped the greenish of the grass

flattened the hill

So Ice what do ya say?

it looks cool... but lets try to move all creature right or left hand side of tees...and lets see how will it be..

agree with zoomhee, looks great but put the creatures off-centered. great art work.

oh and personally, I did like the green in the first v. but both look good.

now the knight really blends in with the grass, because they are the same color... so if you do this, maybe use the brighter green.

oh haha that was a comment for the other version. coincidence we posted @ same time..

ok guys

did pretty much everything you have advised

I hope you enjoyed it :)

I'll submit this tomorrow.



Thanks everyone for the comments!

in the middle of his tail it's bothering me because there are no blackish stripe thingies

24 hours too late ha

Great design. :) The middle of the tail thing bothers me too, but only after someone else mentioned it. Otherwise I would have never noticed. o_O

PERFECTTTT!!! 5$! :D

love the new version, wish i had gotten in here to comment on the tail too. seems thats the only thing that might give ya a lower sub, but i totally love it.

I think it looks great off center, but I kinda agree with ice as to the grass being brighter, as it was in the first, still great though

Looks great...try creatures to flip horizontal so tail does not bother anyone...let see how it looks...

and tail won't be a center after fliping horizontal. what do you think?

This is it

thanks guys!

Y'all better 5 this when it's up for scoring!

talking bout fives, it's five am here :p

zzz

Then best of luck...Hope this time you will win the race :)

I like version 3 most for color

well you can't always get what you want :)

thanks & see you around!

I might submit the Third version

dunno yet

I'll see what the people say and submit tomorrow

i say flip a coin, b/c they both look nice in my opinion

This new version has waaaaaaaaaaaay more depth to it over the third version. this is a winner in a big way and something new for Threadless. imagine that! Something creative AND cute. 5$ all over this one.

the design got declined



"The reason your design was declined is: This version is too big and it would look really odd just having the sides ending abruptly"

ot sure what I'm gonna do with it

last version

promised!

its too bad it got sent back, it'd be cool if they could make the grass go all the way around the shirt. i like this version too though, it does isolate the figures better.

thanks

Hope it doesn't get declined this time

k

just submitted the fuckr :)

Shame...I really like this. Hopefully this one will get through

:D

I like this but took me a while to notice the boy - make him a slightly different colour may be??

is there green on the dragon like in V1? because that was my favorite part

Looks like it. Sucks that it got declined, this one shouldn't be though.

yep Ice, i liked that too

Thanks guys!

i love V1 4 5. i like the hill. v4 is just abit to flat for the grass maybe a few but or if it starts to go down hill. i think you should def submit this

oops you did submit it and i gave it a $5

It's cool. I like it.