Constructive criticism is welcome! :D Hope you all like it.

hah this is AWSOME, the colors are great

Thanks. :) Im still wondering if I should try a different shirt color though. This might be TOO much blue!

Added a third color for more shadow, took out the black lining and put it over a dark grey background.

The problem with them being the same size is that they dont fit together nicely. I always end up with an antler over an eye or a mane covering a mouth. What should be changed about the outlines exactly?

Anyone else?

I think that's ur style . But i think you should fix some animals' faces that looks weird..

I was thinking the tiger looks weird, Im not quite happy with it. Any other animals?

Cool. I think all you need to do with the tiger is move his left eye down a bit. and the giraffe's ears look a bit too small/ like they're getting cut off.

OH! Wow I didn't even see the giraffe thing, It's kind of like the zebra's snout, its dark so I forgot to put dark blue over it. And I'll try that with the tiger!

Fixed the tiger's eye, and giraffe's ears. Which colors do you like better? Any more suggestions? :)

i like it!

preferably in brown. :]

:)

Anyone else?

i guess brown really goes best with many t-shirt colors, blue don't. i liked it also, great work, i probably can't do that in a million years.

LOVE IT, must have it. It's totally similar to a design I have in critique, which I am going to link you to at the bottom, so I am absolutely biased. Constructive criticism.



The tiger face blends a little awkwardly into the llama neck, which isn't helped by the caribou antler. It also makes the hare look like a jackalope. But that doesn't bother me. I love jackalopes.



The springbok's neck needs to extend down further. Put a little darkish blue for its shoulder under the zebra's chin.



Giraffes have ears. They have luffly tapery pear-shaped ears with black fringe. They also have horns, which are tall, dark-tipped and goofily tufted on the top. What you have there is an earless giraffe with flexible horns. Giraffes have many wonderful head-features and you should embrace the opportunity to draw them all.



One interesting thing is that in the three antelopey-creatures you've got here, all of the females can have horns. Female giraffes, caribou/reindeer and springboks all have horns/antlers as well as the male. These species are pretty rare in that, as males are usually the only ones to have horns or antlers. It's so funny that you picked these three! Isn't it? Am I a geek? Yes, I am a geek.



While I adore the title "Teapot full of Chaos" and will love it forever, does it really suit the drawing?



Hauntingly similar to my piece. Can they be friends? I want them to be friends.

Hahah, well thanks for the criticism. I wasn't really sure about the name either haha.



I thought giraffe's had ears too, but the one I drew this from didn't? Maybe I'm just blind haha.



I'll try to fix the tiger. Its always the tiger that's the issue haha, he's just awkward.



I'll try working on the springbok? I've never heard that before, what I have there is a gazelle.

Great design and artwork. [= I think the lines are a bit shakey, but other than that, it's cool (and, yeah, giraffes have ears, but someone has already pointed that out to you).



And um.. I'd have to go with the beige/brown color.

Yay 4th version. added the ear on the giraffe, cleaned up some spots, added details, and decided placement.

this is great! The only suggestion I have is that I would love to see the elephants trunk extend a bit past the general animal blob? it could be a nice visual balance for the elk antler...



Please crit mine if you have a chance:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/39805/Birch_Beats

Thanks!

Like this? :o Changed the elephants trunk to extend past the animal crowd.

Anything?

how nice! good idea! i liked the blue version too, this is so safari ;) but also suiting. and i love the elephant!

Thank you. :) Anything I can do to enhance the design anymore?

I think a stroke around the whole piece would be cool...its cool as is, would like it on a diff color tee, mayb navy.



u sketched this out 1st right, id like2see that

The sketch looks just like this, minus the color haha. And I tried navy, but it doesnt quite look right to me. The navy looks good with the blue design however.

Oh and what color stroke are you thinking?

blue



i know you already cleaned up the lines, but it still looks a lil sketchy IMHO.

11 mammals and one bird?

maybe if you had some birds flying away in the back as if they escaped first?

I feel like the birds alone in the back would just look weird. Idk.

I feel like it needs something more...but what?!

faded solid tree on the background?



sun rising? sunset? sun offset? lol.



i'm not sure either.



maybe the teapot on the back, and the "smoke" extends till the front ?

and oh, Renee get him a vote plz!

Hmmmm, I actually really like that, maybe having the teapot more of a background than a foreground. And I def. gave tasty a $5. I really hope it gets printed!

Uhm... well when i said about the teapot being on the back i meant really on the back of the tee, lol. then the smoke could go through on side and the main graphic would come out of it...



thx for the support with "lilevil" =D

i would add you on AIM to chat but i don't have/use it at all, lol.



i rly thought it was going to Green Contest 1st time i saw this tee.

Great work :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/42675/I_am_less_monster_than_you

Great design! It might look better with something in the background.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/42675/I_am_less_monster_than_you Thanks!

Hmmm, laio I'll def. try it.



@harturo123: I thought about some backgrounds stuff but everything I've tried so far has looked kind of ridiculous.

Haha no background. There's definitely enough going on in this image. The lines look almost fuzzy to me. It'd look much better if you clean it up a little. And the tiger face is a little too elongated. (The Zebra looks like it's about to munch on the animal underneath it, haha)



Overall, really cute. I like it.