A play on the word 'cursor'.



Any thoughts?

More. More over-the-top. More characterization. Who's the cursor cursing at? And why? Give us a story, not just a one-liner.

I think you should clean up the lines a bit (at least on the curser), make them smoother,



and that right bottom corner slightly higher than the left botttom for perspective. - and just see what it looks like with just the middle swearing bubble.

Add an "icon" and then the curser can be curising Jesus.

Here it is with just the middle speech bubble.

i agree that its a good concept, but the drawing of it needs a bit of work, could we see a tee shirt placement?



check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/41940/Veggies_Anonymous#v5

hmm, I don't think the bubble needs to be extruded. I would like it flat, because it's not an actual object like the cursor.



Any feedback on mines?

Surprise!!

hidden in the dark



Thanks!

Hahah...how ironic. I really like this. However, maybe you should use more colors to spice it up. :)