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honestly just a visual thing is maybe the sticks should be shorter, just because idk if noodle arms could hold that well. And maybe try the mallet as teeth. just ideas.

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cute design

umm.. i think light blue tee would work better with the design..

and the musical note on the lower right should be high above the teeth and i think the cavity should be darker..



help me out?



NO LIP SERVICE!

That is really cute... I would get rid of the music note on the left - it looks like its just floatin there for no reason...And maybe you should do a little more detail to the character playin... Maybe he should have more definition in his tongue??

Looks fun though!

hahahahahaha



the circles of the eyes, hands and drumsticks grab my attention right away... maybe b/c they are perfect circles and the rest are not? I'm not sure.. perhaps it's just me.

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haha! great design! I'd change the end of the drumsticks from lime green to another color. it grabs too much attention.



Please Critique mine if you have time :)

yeah, white might be nice. then you lose a color.



Could you please help me?

may be yellow colour look good & the t-shirt colour is perfect. How about some shading in the tongue?



Need help about the better version. Thanks

I think the tongue needs to look more like a tongue (a line down the middle, shading?) the big music note in front is distracting and maybe try some different notes? not all the same

I like the idea. You should draw the tonsil (not the tonsil really but I dont know how it is called) a little less perfectly.

Little less perfectly in the sense that it is too "regular" (perfect circles etc)

its called the uvula.... mine isn't even shaped that way, I've got a double uvula



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This design is looking solid. It is quite playful, and easily the best version that you have had so far. Just depends on how far you want to push it.



This can be a finished product if you want it to be right now.

I don't like how you can see the bottom of the teeth. (like the rounded bit) I think it should be cut off by lips or go over the bottom half with the background color.



Good concept and I like the simplistic design.

I agree with Harpz here. You could mess with it a bit, but it's looking good. Maybe arrange the notes to be a little more musical, and perhaps give the arms more sense of movement.

Is he hitting the tongue or the teeth? add a musical vibration of some sort emitting musical notes. Could look nice :)

ahhh sooo cute! i like it

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Maybe you could add an outline of a lip outside of the tooth? So that it'll really look like a mouth open. (:

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Hey there, here's my latest designupdate



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Is there any update to this design?