Ok my first non-competition-themed design for threadless.

Do you think I should take the plane at the top corner out?

I made the decision to get rid of the plane, so here is the new version.

I made the decision to get rid of the plane, so here is the new version.

It looks very promising, but as a tip for the layout in the competition I suggest that you try to put the whole design as big as you can, and then some details and how it would look in the shirt, but that is secondary. Right now it is really hard to see the whole thing and that is going to lower your score.

The current version isn't showing up for me, but I very much like the first 2 versions!