I need your comments!!

Thanks

i hope you understand the design...i need more space ;)

too many speech bubbles me thinks



maybe one bubble with lots of points

but very cute.



btw, there's a hot beverage on my WIP

i don't understand what the sugar cube is inside. a bag? a bomb?



i love your characters though.

it's a bag! i will work on it again to be must visible!

Thanks

I love the placement!!!!!



I agree with the comments on the illustration though!

It took me a while to understand what was going on.

I like the swoosh of coffee/tea, but I think the rest, although very cute) is too hard to easily understand.

you can see it better here:

http://storage.canalblog.com/60/12/115467/10427642.jpg

http://storage.canalblog.com/99/80/115467/10427651.jpg

have you got an idea of a design to explain that the sugar has fear to melt?

sorry for the blank^^

Nobody want to comment? bouhhhhhhhhh

I like v2! But add more speech bubbles to them. The more bubbles, the more EXCITED EMPHASIS!

have the speech bubbles connected, so still roundy like a cloud, with lots of points directed toward the speakers



the sugars's bubble should be a thought bubble

i prefer with more bubbles too. i hear them crying in my head "go sugar go!!!""jump!!" "you can do that"..."sugar,sugar,sugar,sugar"

i'll try on it again!

Thanks

Yes I agree on the bubbles. I liked all the sugars in the speech bubbles you had at first, it showed they really wanted it. But, it was a little hard to understand but who cares. This is awesome. SUBMIT IT!!!!!!

up!

Maybe try using slightly different fonts for all the sugars. Or draw the dont yourself. I like it otherwise. It will score well!

thanks!!

hehehe, it's so cute

Cool idea and great craftsmanship!

looks much better

i love sugar

and all the other things

thanks again!I will draw a font myself, it's a good idea!

I especially love the coffee hair folicles.

Good suggestions about font. I like the whole design, the composition works really well! I miss the teeth in your characters!

it makes too much on their faces witn the teeth;)

with oe without the spoon?

i draw the font!

no spoon imo

thanks again!

the last version!

If it's the last version I'm not saying anything=)

I think you could hace the words in different directions not all horizontally. I said it.

Is it just me or do you think the coffee/tea cup should be tilted from the saucer a bit? I mean, if you're pouring usually you need to hold the bottum to get it to stick like that. If it's just being tilted... maybe I'm crazy. Looks good though

you're right ehsteban ;) i will change that!

the last of the last^^

wow awesome!



i would like to see some rotten teeth, but this is a great design. i like everything about it!!

i love it. plz comment my first.

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I now allow you to submit this...you have my blessings lol

nicenicenice!
love it, great work. you should submit this :)

if you have time, please critique mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72811/My_life_is_upside_down