Ideas anyone? :)

The type, needs more work, also the monster and the cat...i dont like the eyes of that cat.

venganza-vendetta

ok..

There's no chance that this will print with the type on it!



Maybe if you just showed the monster eating the cat.

yeah i know, typo suck i will change it.

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do you think it will not be approved because it's written pussy? or just cuz the typo sux?...

I like the design a lot.. i think you should leave the title as is, and take out all the words.. just put the monster and cat design on the shirt.. people will get the idea from the title. I also like how he is just holding the cat.. the expression on the cats face is hilarious, i dont think the monster actually has to eat him.



Here is mine if you get the chance

do you think i should leave the text? or maybe i should take it out and give him just a fork or something ;)

hey this is cool..!!

i don't usually like txt on tees..

but the txt looks much better than the 1st version.

the fork idea is cool..

and u can add those little white things they put on chickens' legs in cartoons before they're put in the oven (obviously i dunno the name! lol)

one more suggestion..if the cat got more of a blank look on her face.. like if u erase the mouth.

lolz will threadless print something with words like that?

What?... pussy is a small cat! :)

hehe, nice. well, i'd say experiment with the monster's fur a bit. right now it looks like he is bald with blue stubble. If you were going for a furry monster, you might want to fix that before submitting it.



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I like the cat better in v1. The monster is much improved.



comment on mine ?

should the cat have hair too? i dont really like a hairy pussy... :D

also, what about the colors?

no, i think the cat should not have any hair.

this way there is a contrast between the monster & the cat.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/39926/weapon_of_mass_destruction

I can only imagine the creeps who would wear this.

haha..wow...wow. Maybe if it looked like he was gripping/holding the cat more :)

Pretty good. Actually, I think it would be a lot more successful if you didn't spell it out; Let the people figure it out.

what about shirt color? also, do you think i need to add some backgrounds?

thx!

with out the cat at all?!

i think if the shirt color is blue it would more expresive....anyway i like this...submit!!

I think Chubra means add a bib on the monster.



Also, I don't think it should have a background. If it does, a very minimalistic one.



Maybe it would be funny to have the bib say "I design if you please)

Umm, my comment got cut off mysteriously.



Maybe it would be funny to have the bib say "I

Oh, trying to write a heart with an angle bracket made my comment asplode. Nevermind.

so you guys think he need a napkin with I (HEART) Pussy?

wont ppl think the dude just likes to eat cats? thats not funny...

It is great 4 me

Submit it

do you think V4 is better?

no

been a while since i visited this design..i think it looks much better now..

try to make it a little smaller on the tee..

and see how it looks on a light blue tee..

great work ..



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Interesting.... Great critique satir

well?

Huh… Is there a double meaning or I'm a pervert?

you can read how ever you want dude ;), personally, for me its a big monster that just loves eating young, cute, possibly hairless - cats :)

i like the white shirt

maybe gray?



with or with out the napkin?

anyone?

nothing?!

this is hilarious, vulgar...but hilarious. uhmmm the texture on the monster is good, the fur goes well. i might like to see it with out the braces maybe? just a thought. if thats a quick fix, if not..i dont think its too big of deal. other then that i like how you tied the cats color into the monsters apron, it makes this a really strong piece. I think its ready to submit. very funny idea!



"Pride"-critique it!

Pretty hilarious idea, but I'm not sure if threadless would accept it considering they tell you to keep in mind the community starts at age 13. But its a neat idea all together.

hmm i think that it doesnt look quite right that the cat's head and tail are a different color from its body.

Hmm, def a bit dodge...but funny! Yeah, agree ^ about the cat colour, maybe make it 1 colour and then just the darker colour around the eyes (the way you did the monster) then only the "pussy" text on the apron, think it needs to be blue as well, doesn't work for me in the yellow...other than that, it looks good!

ok, worked a bit on the pussy... what do you think?

so...... thats it?

ok... so its 2 to submit and 3 not to submit.. any one wish to say why? :)

I just said don't submit because I don't like the idea or think it would work in the competition. But when I look at the monster in the placement it does look nice on the t-shirt. So, I think you are misusing your monster :)



Toasty

I think the monster needs hands, and the pussy is a little fat :-)



Forest friends, unite!

Heh, cute lil monster, reminds me of Fosters a little bit ;D The braces are cute, but silly. I'm not too keen on the way you've drawn his hair :/ The cat's right (our left) ear isn't fully connected to his head.



The message is silly, slightly inappropriate but not too offensive for threadless. The shadow under him shouldn't just be under his feet, it should be under the whole character, even the cat!



Everybody keeps linking to their critique in their comments.. so I guess I'll do the same ;P

10x man, truly, gr8 critique :)

does any one have a different idea for the "i (heart) ???"

:)