The title is an homage to Calvin & Hobbes. Just playing around with simple shapes. C&C welcome.

Aaargh, again. If click 'Needs work' or 'Don't submit', for criminy's sake say why, please!

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It's really nice, it make me smile but I think it's maybe a little too much simple. maybe add a second color and it would be great ^^

(humm too much "maybe" in my sentence XD sorry for my bad english, hope you understand as well :[ )

It's fine. Niho-jin desu ka?

Niho-jin desu ka?

what? XD sorry I don't understand :[

'Niho-jin desu ka' means 'Are you Japanese' in Romaji =)



Tasha, thank you.

A bit more detail.



Ignore the colour if you don't like it, it's just a crit and white goes with anything!

except white obv. :p



i like it, but the lava seems too simplistic for me.

v.cool tho :)

A bit more detail...

bump...

Nice, nice. The concept of the volcano seems lost now. Second dino needs more definition; somewhere besides directly in front of the volcano. I like the mountains. Pterodactyl?

Lost the volcano, it was getting lost in the mountains. Added a pterodactyl.

bump...

No comments on the update?

bumpity bump bump

I love this version! :D This design makes me smile. I don't think it should be on orange, though. Perhaps Pacific Blue or Royal? I don't know.



Anyways, losing the volcano was a nice idea. I'd like to see the design on other colors.

I liked the volcano....maybe have square-ish lava coming down the sides? Also, your stegosaurus is really small, and I think he kinda gets lost. Maybe try making him a little bigger?

Yah, I say bring the volcano back, the original one. And I know you are going for the simple shape thing, but I think it would be cool if you had a second colour for shading/adding depth.

the big dinosaur makes me laugh :D



the little dino on the bottom might get lost. i think you should try the volcano again.



orange is kinda iffy - consider changing it to a deeper color?

Ignore the color really, it's just for preview purposes.



The stego looks small on screen, but imagine the size of it on the actual shirt. He's small to give the thing some depth and perspective.

oh i guess your right.



i really hope that it's gets printed! i love it :D

He, he, he. This design makes me happy on the inside in a good way.



I think all you really need at this point is a catchy title so all the trendy people won't be all snooty towards it.

Perhaps 'The Shirt That Time Forgot'?

better, better ^^ I really like it now :)

Submit it :D

I will do some more colorways and tweaks and see what the general consensus is first.

Ok, if you can let me know your favourite two colors I will see what wins and use them in my pushed design.

Oh, tough...dark blue, and the lighter brown one for me , more to the blue though (not sure of the proper names of those colours). NEVER orange. I personally detest orange on anything.

I really like the green, but also both blues

dark blue is cool

even green it is ^^

i like both the blues

blues are winning so far then...bump for more opinions

Yeah go blues mate...the more I look at this the more I like that colour option both in the dark and light

I like the khaki one too, I'll use that and the two blues as pushed examples probably.

I love this design! I actually like it on orange...but then...I like orange. Plus I get tired of the same old colors. I like the dark blue and burgundy. Although, goign for depth, the stego does need to be slightly bigger I think... or come down a little...the mountain horizon line sorta fuzzes him up a bit.

Yes, he's a tricky little git. I think it would be fine on an actual t-shirt, it's just the size of the preview makes it a bit indistinct.

either blue for sure.



i think gingersomething is right - the horizon line is making him kinda disapear. maybe that's why i thought he'd get lost. humor us and move him a little south? :)

Adding more objects wasnt what was necessary to improve the design. I think v2 was about the point to stop in that regards. It just needs more complexity to the acutal geometry. If you can think of ways to say add more shapes that make up your characters and scenery perhaps thats a good idea. Ultimately your encountering a flaw with working with basic gemoetric shapes.



Feedback appreciated:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/4007/What_was_that_sound

http://www.threadless.com/critique/4157/Listen_to_the_voices

ok this isn'y my kind of thing but the style is consistant and works reasonably nicely on the tee, maybe the composition would be better if you varied and tightened up the space between objects

Denied submission because it's too big - got to be with 13 x 17 inches (always thought it was 16 x 16 inches). Ho hum

I don't know what it needs, I like it and I don't

does anyone know how to check the size of a design in flash mx?

That is a fabulous shade of orange darling!

Burgundy and dark blue. Take away the clouds, put the pterodactyl lower, that might make it 16 x 16