Hi there,



I've had this image on my flickr stream for quite a while and it has been quite popular. I liked the original ink and have reworked it in photoshop a number of times. I think it would make a great Tee!



Give me a score or a critique please!

I like it too! I'm not sure about having the border around it like that though - could you possibly make the lines fade into the tee or something? To me it would seem too much like a self-made tee to keep it with the black border - like you just slapped it on there. But it's a sweet design still.

Very Cool!! Have you considered extending the lines or softening the border to a blur. Would you consider it on black?

blacks a good idea or else you'll have to go all out stainglass colour effect which might change the context some?

The design is original and I like it alot. I agree with Richal about the border. Maybe take it out and fade the line and if you can incorporate some color to give it the stained glass effect would be bonus!

wow...that's really nice..would you happen to have a link to your original work?



i think it looks fine as it is...but have you experimented with colors yet? maybe just try and see how it looks...keep it up!

Ok so the site is misbehaving, preview was all squashed. Then it published a blank after the 2nd version..? I will try again!!

I like it, the composition is very interesting, but so squared looks more for a print than for a tee.

Try breaking the edges somewhere and it will be more t-design.

Good luck with your creation!!



Any feedback on my design? Pollution: "Rubbish eats both"

Definitly works better on the darker shirt! As many already said, try to brake the rectangular shape. What kind of colors do you have in mind for this piece?.. or are you going to leave it B&W?

Yes this is amazing I love the original sketch and it is brilliant to see it make it's way from your sketch pad on a tee! :)) Excellent!! :))

Thanks PB,

as you can tell by my rummaging through my old sketchbooks I have been searching for some some of my images that could look great on a tee, loving the motiv of yours, keep at it!!



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This would make a gorgeous print, but I'm going to echo the others in saying the rectangular shape is no good for a shirt.



Right now it looks like great artwork that somebody slapped onto a shirt. Try to make it so that it looks like it was designed specifically for the shirt it will be printed onto.



Whether it means cutting elements or adding more in is up to you.