Tell me what you think, I'm pretty much open to anything right now.

bump

The hand looks so realistic, but the fire, clouds, lightning, and water are so different. They almost don't look right together. Maybe it's the line thickness.

agreed with the above.. but not so much bout line thickness.. i think if you submitted you may get through the pre-screening.. but probably wont do very well in the competition.. so improve a little.



i suggest you put more time into detail and stuff on the fire, lightning, and rain especially.. also the clouds..

Well, I'm almost completely addicted to the critique forum so I never expected to send this in right away. I'll definately work on the clouds and flames.

now this is very interesting but it's kind of simple

i don't like the colors either

awesome art though!

don't know if i like the cracks so much...or the drip on the hand but this is really cool just need some fine tuning

Have mercy on me, text nazis.

bump

awesome...V2 is the best

not sure how to improve this. looks great.

I tweaked the colors a little bit, I'm glad you like.

bump

If there is something about this design you do not like, speak now, or forever hold your peace.

i don't like "take my hand" but i like "everything's fine"

also i don't like the drips coming off at the bottom.



but i'd buy it!!

I'd like to keep the drips but I can see how the take my hand is already implied.

you can't really see it and i don't think it's necessary. so that's why.

I like the drips....

took out the take my

it's fine.

only thing i don't get is why there's fire and stuff. but it probably doesn't matter. great job.

it is a controdiction to the everything's fine statement. The fact that the hand is melting, burning and evaporating is to create a feeling that something is wrong.

and it looks cool.

oh cool.



yeah it looks extremely cool lol

so, i think i'm gonna sub it later on tonight unless somebody else hase something to say...

why is there blue in the writing?

asthetics? Does it not look good?

hmm put it all through the whole phrase? that might look good

Like this??

sure i think that looks good

This is the best version, I like the blue through the words... Kind of looks like the wrist is bleeding from the three lines coming down?

a bit emo then lol

oh can you put blue in the parenthesis and make it better?

i like my parentheses to be right :)

fantastic

???

Parentheses?

but i also really liked it on natural/creme



try some other colors

I think she meant apostrophe

ooooooooohhhhhhhh

um yes. i never remember what it is haha

here you go

but but but.... switch it the other way?? sorry i have ocd.

I fixed it, you'll see it if I make some drastic changes, or if i sub it.

ok that's great i look forward to seeing it!

i think it looks great.

i think it looks great but i just dont like the fire, maybe you should make the hand deteriorate aa bit more and change the shapes of the fire, because i see that style of flames on everything

woah, this is really cool. I love how the fingers are kind of dissolving at the tips, and the text is good (usually text kinda messes with a design).



take a look at mine???

the only thing I would suggest is maybe make the words stand out a little bit more. Other than that, cool design!



critique mine?

1. http://www.threadless.com/critique/22188/Rude_Bird



2. http://www.threadless.com/critique/22183/Hmmm

Um, yall do realize that I put this up for scoring about 290 days ago?