just a doodle.



gimme some feedback people!



thanks!

I think the red makes it pop more.



please gimme some comments/advice!

i love the shark! maybe there should be something going on in the background to add to the humor.



please score mine if you have time :)

I actually really like this. Don't like the mis-spelling though.

yeah i cant figure out whether i like the mispelling or not.



i did it because when read i want it with an accent.

new text placement.



like? yes? no?



feedback?



maybe please?

anyone?

It's okay. I'm not sure I understand the shak part. I think I would like it if it was shark better.

yeah that was my worry.



when you say shak it sounds like an australian accent.



but i might be leaning more towards the correct spelling now.

just trying some things out to make the tee more interesting.



and shark or shak?

saying shak gives it an australian accent which is what i was going for.



lemme know people!

i thought you were going for an australian accent i looked at it and then i read your comment.... i like the text on this one better the "o" is kind of getting cut off though and the "i" makes the shark look like a popsicle.... other then that looking good...



crit me back

anyone?

I dont like the textures in the type, everything looks fine besides that

does anyone have a preferred text placement?



or more opinions on the shak vs shark spelling?

ARRK ARRK. probably it fits better to shak. Or maybe some "I EATS YUU!" ^^

I'd buy it right away!!

Click for Crit!

Well, another point of view here. I like the textures in the type but I think they don't match with the lines on the illustration. You could maybe add the same texture to the shark edges or make them thicker, I don't know. But I like how it looks. Good luck with it!

I think the type should be clean and crisp like the illustration. Apart from that it's cool!



Crit mine!

I like the new text. Maybe make the back fin larger and have a wavy line go across if to suggest water? Then again maybe not.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/39263/Bad_Minton