New critique of my old critique. Not entirely sold on the title, my old critique had a watership down obscure title.

I kind of like the neopolitan color palette that i have going on at the moment, but i think i will also to a full 8 color with halftones that are all the rage.

random, but this looks totally like a select to me haha just the overall composition and illo



that's not a bad thing - I'd love to see a bit more pop. looks great so far!

on silver gray. help me pick! Full color version coming soon.

trying for vintage children's book illustration. Please check the previous versions and help me decide on colors!

smaller on the shirt?

Last version looks best to me, size seems about right, maybe a tad lower though. Beautiful!

I agree with a TAD lower on this version...but it's almost perfect on version 2. and the silver option is incredible - the subtle pink adds really nice highlights.

great illustration ...

the last one is the best ...

SUBMIT...

plz critique mine

Yeah the silver version is more wearable to me personally. Ill maybe add that in as an option. I am so sick of being stuck on this design that i just want it to end, if you know the feeling.

Loved the B&W version and this is still better. I agree this is ready to go to print.

Wow, I love this! V2 for me. Nice work!



If you have a mo, please come and cast a vote on my first subs:

This one!



This other one!

really nice!

Wow! I like the colors from the previous one best, I think!

Your honest opinion on this?

i love this.. but i prefer the version 2



New Version of my design, check it out! :)

I like the silver one!!

wow!

Alright! thanks everyone for the feedback. I think i am pushing this into the wild!

Last minute brilliant title ideas?

perfect

Yes! Perfect!

awesome! print for sure.

tile sounds fine to me. The design is awesome! great job!



Please Critique mine if you have time :)

That is some spectacular art. Love it.

I actually really like that blue you have going in the image, will that be present on the shirt?



If so, submit this.

Lucky Rabbit Feet

Follow the Rabbit If You Can

A Narrow Escape

Faster Than the Average Rabbit





I dunno, I'm just spewing random thoughts...

Title is perfect! And the illustration is amazing. 5$

Escaped by a hare

Why rabbits run fast

the prey

ooh good one. I like the escaped by a hare

Thanks everyone i subbed it already with the title of the critique, its not great, but i am antsy after working on this one for so long!



Now to the next project. Man unemployment is good for my illustration time!

sweet! will be waiting for the print

love this ssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooo much!

Great design.

there is no way this cannot get printed. I'd wear it.





Care to critique mine?

Wow real talent here!



Well done!



My Crit!

No Doubt Cool work, should do very well, will keep an eye out for it :)

Wow!!! I love your design! Yeah definitely ready to submit! I'll be sure to give it a big 5$ when I see it up.

Could you please help me out a bit on my Design. That would be awesome!

Wow Awesome!

Beautiful! Sub it

may I have your opinion?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74708/Electric_vertigo

Sorry, is this ever sub yet???

This looks proper good. Sub it! ^_^

wow! this is amazing! sub, it's a 5 from me:)

please let me know what you think of this critique design:Power Plant:) Thanks!

wooow!! i like the style!!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/75338/bunnytea

Ready to go.