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There will also be halftone patterns like the asteroid is sunk into the shirt.



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Neat start and cute characters :)

Progress...

looks better than the previous version... just add some details.. and that's it.. I guess...



looks like they invaded a cookie haha

Now with halftone shadowing.

for me I prefer the one without the halftone shadow ...

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^second that

I also like it without the halftone shadow, but I do like that it looks more like a planet, and less like a cookie. I would also take away that big alien on the right. It isn`t on the shirt, so I assume that it for presentation purposes only.



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One thing that would be great is if you had more aliens on the t-shirt.

Shading instead of halftones.

Aliens have some shading too, now.

Alternate shirt color suggested.

i prefer this guys, but about the colors and the drawing (guys not included) i prefer the v1



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Umm... i dont really get the idea, and belly placement looks a little bit odd i think? perhaps more alien above to the chest area

is it a cookie or a planet?

i like the idea that it's a planet crowded with alien explorers, exploring the tshirt.

(shouldn't the one with the box, be more upside down?)

I like your drawing a lot.



I'd have to agree with FrogKing. My only thought is to add some aliens on the chest, falling towards the moon cookie as well. It's way too central to the belly. It may look more whimsical with aliens floating above heading to their destination.

i like the shading arround the planet on the tee in v3. gives the design more space like a crashed astroid on your jelly. the guy on the left could get some waves around his foot like a stone does after falling into water. for me the hole where the guy with the ca comes out needs a clean black filling. finaly maybe it should be scaled smaller on the tee.