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I think i get the idea here. I would like to see the next version I dont think you should put a beach umbrella since its midnight and there is no sunlight. comment on mine?
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pretty cute idea. wish i could see it better though...
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really really hard to see what is going on here.....i will watch for this to evolve into something fantastic.....
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This'll look good with some colours in, especially if you carry out the lighting well; keep going. Thanks for the comment on
Flaaamingo :) Yea I didnt have any pink ink but I had food dye, so went for it. |
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I can't see whats going on...I think it looks like a cool idea...lol but I can see it. Take it into photoshop and raise the contrast in levels and use a smart blur or noise reduction so its legible.
feel free to crit mine! http://www.threadless.com/critique/38224/ZombieMan |
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this has a lot of good potential that threadless loves... keep working on it
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hey everyone, thanks for the comments so far. RedRobotMonkey, i think ur right, no beach umbrella. Sorry to have you guys straining your eyes so much. I guess i sketched super lightly and the scan barely picked it up. tried to add some contrast in Pshop, but no real improvement.
As soon as I get some background in there I'll rescan it at a higher dpi. |
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i wish i could see it better. but i like the concept. i'll look for this again.
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from what i can see, it looks pretty good. keep going :)
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this is eventually going to be AWESOME:) i like it so far. love to see some vector versions...
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step right up folks! see what you can see in this blurry mess I call a critique! lol
i swear i swear i swear, before the weekend is over I'll have a new version up! thanks for checkin in so far folks! |
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ok ok! Horror II's come around and I haven't done anything with this since. Before the week's done I should have some nice crispy lines for you guys to look at
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will i ever finish this?! lol!
hmmmmmmm......Loves Horror.....hmmmm...let's see :) |
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Seems like you got a good thing going. We'd love to see a more inked out version!
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With this one, I've got the monsters in a cemetery instead of in a house, I've angled the couch to take away the horizontal-ness of the previous design and I put the vampire on the ground and the mummy on a beach/lounge chair on the side. Was thinking about having a beach umbrella over the mummy, whadya think?
the background is just gonna be a bit misty with headstones' silhouettes i think. The lighting is gonna be critical for this and I just hope I can pull it off