Need your suggestions ........

I like it. It's colorful.

it is nice, but personaly I don't like that lightcold brown backround. Maybe use a little bit lighter and warmer color

thanks. will try to follow your suggestion

i think it sits on the shirt funny?



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Now what do u think?

its the same thing. need shadows for the umbrella the starfish the sun....all your shadows are pointing in different directions also...

I think the shadows are pointing in diff directions due to the sub being in the centre.I think that would be made more obvious if you made the shadows of the objects far from him longer and the objects closer to him much shorter. Don't forget to shade the objects too, just a bit so they dont look flat. Its a really relaxed shirt ha.



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yeah shading would help a bit. cute job though.



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this is funny. maybe make the sun look alittle less flat.

thanks.

i think the lines around the sand are too harsh. maybe you could have it fade out with halftones. or just put it on a tan shirt.



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Very clever, especially the shadows. :)



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yeah, the 2D objects don't really work in a 3D dimension

It would work better in the sun were not so flat

i like the idea...its just the execution needs work.



i wish all the things around the sun was melting. :)

Thanks for your suggestions friends. now I have tried to made it better. I have submitted v3 & v4. which one is better option?



The idea came into my mind by the word sunbath. It seems funny that a sun it self is taking sunbath, using sun tan lotion, drinking juice & using umbrella. All the things which we use to reduce the effects of sun.

And also using sun glasses...

I like v4 better. That being said, the gradients don't look that great. maybe if they were halftone? The sun doesn't really have a nice feel to him, either, you know? He looks flat. Could be a cool design eventually, though!

Thanks friends!

Any suggestions how can to make sun better??

I need help if somebody can ...



Can we use blur in the design? Is it allowed????

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Is blur technique allowed in the design???

What do u think about this one??

Any suggestions???

Need your help to improve this. Any suggestions???

Can see the placement in v5

Great start, eye-popping fun shirt. While the starfish and crab seem to be running the lobster looks like it's lying down. You might try a different angle on the lobster if you're going if you mean to convey he's running away. Maybe try rotating the star fish counter clock wise so he's on his right foot a bit more. Two other things I can see is that the sun is a bit flat, maybe add more volume to the globe. And his arms and legs are hard to see. Maybe some more definition/separation between the body and the arms/legs.



Nice illo, fun shirt and just in time for warmer weather ahead. Cheers!

Thanks!!

Sorry, didn't realize this was V6 (duh!).



You can use blur but then it would have to be printed using simulated process printing.

i think you should go back to v4! it looked the best :)

I am confused...



which version is better & i shall work on it???

help!

I like V4 better as well but I think it would work much better on the cream shirt. It's not as busy, and the perspective is better. I'd still try to add to and define the sun as I said in V6 though. Cheers!

Again with some changes.



What do u think now??

I like the concept, it's funny. I don't know though, I don't think I'd buy it. Needs something else... Have you thought about putting the sun in a bathtub and then have the rubber ducky, soap, etc. running away?



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ulb719 sounds interesting .... A Sun taking a bath..... SUN BATH!!! Can you try that one??? It would be more cooler and compact ..... zabardast ho jaye ga!!!



As far as this design is concerned.... I think RUN is not looking good. If we put it on a sky blue colour..... how would it look?

ulb719 sounds interesting .... A Sun taking a bath..... SUN BATH!!! Can you try that one??? It would be more cooler and compact ..... zabardast ho jaye ga!!!



As far as this design is concerned.... I think RUN is not looking good. If we put it on a sky blue colour..... how would it look?

I tried it on sky blue but i didn't like that. U can see that in v3. I don't like the idea of bath tub. here i can show more details.

I will delete the speech bubble if u think it is not looking nice.

Any other suggestions friends??

I'd lose the text, the concept is strong

Thanks a lot.

i think the sun looks great! i still think you should bring back all the other stuff from v4. That crab, sand castle and everything looked great!

Thanks iambeast. When i submitted v4 then people didn't like that so I am confuse & double minded about your suggestion.



should I again load v4 & wait for the response? with the sand colour t-shirt or with the lime colour?

I like this 1, just think the crab needs some outline around it, where its body touches the gradient of the sun's rays it's disappearing...yeah, loose the "run" text, don't really need it, and then I kinda liked the sandcastle, add that in too, add the moment you've got the bucket and spade, but no castle...other than that I prefer this version to the others!

Thanks for the suggestions.



V4 or V7??

V7

V4 or V7??

use the sun from this version and most of the rest from v4.

Thanks iamabeast. I know your choice. I appreciate.. but still i want to know about others choice.

i agree with iamabeast

Agree with iamabeast as well. And keep away from text bubbles.

make a combination of v4 en v7,

so bring back the shadows in the scenery and try to brighten up the chair as well. it all looks now a bit flat imo.

Thank a lot. I will try to work on your suggestions & hope can create a better version.

I like the idea!!!

But it would be better with some shades.

Great job!!

:D

Waiting for the improved version...... Good Luck!!!

Thanks!

the concept is cool or better hot. when the guys´re running because of the heat you could show this with melting stuff like the umbrella. i mean you have the idea right in but not strong enough. leave the text, it´s not needed. hope to see more.

Everything is too flat...

What do u think now??

well i kinda think everything (except the sun) should look exactly like it did in v4, it's just my opinion :)



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I agree with the flat comment in the last version. I think your sand should have more.. terrain. heh :) Work with putting in some texture in the background. I'd love to see the next version :)

thanks. any other suggestions.........

Does texture works with shirt printing?? I have added texture in the background. what do u think about this & also about the colour of the shirts??

Is it looking better now??

this looks great, and i love the idea.





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Cheers.

any comments????

awsume design - and great concept!! the only thing that feels weird to me is the umbrella... and it probably is in the right angle... it just feels off for some reason...



Good work, either way!!



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Should I submit it with the sand background on different colour shirts or v8 design on the same colour shirt?