Comments and suggestions will be really appreciate! :)

haha!! Funny Dog!! Great work!!!

Haha cool idea. I think the color of the dog should be lighter so that the the details of it can come out more.



Please take a look at my design:

Death of a Caveman

too dark....



See mee Pleese

The dog should be less dark. I love the urine... in a way :)



12 USS starships - need critique



Score Me

i think the fly should be over his head and not between the sign and the dog



See mee Pleese

Yeah i think the dog can be darker,nice drawing though. comment on mine?

i putt a little bit lighter, changed the fly`s position and drop one color.

much better now!!

haha, the style of the dog is great!

thanks guys!

the contrast is better now?

Colours are a big improvement, good stuff.



Please check mine if you have time:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/39003/What_really_makes_the_world_go_round

i added more flies and improved the wood sign... what do u think?

Boa Adolfo!! Pra te ser sincero acho que já está tranquilo.. se tiver que mudar um troço ou outro agora, é detalhe.

haha, I love the dog! maybe make his legs the same color as his body, and just outline them so that they are still visible.



Please Critique mine

I think it's cool, just not entirely sure why he's not mad (is that what it says behind the cross out?) - because he's asleep? Wet himself ? Wetting himself seems pretty mad.

I haven't seen that in such way.. maybe the dog doesn't want to be seen like 'mad'. You really can see that he is 'mad' but he wants to be recorgnise like a normal dog.

that´s it KarlGeorges, perfect!



Thanks for the comments!

please don't comment on other people's submissions with a link. it's really looked down upon because if everyone stared doing it, it would be super overwhelming!



we all try to keep the 'can you look at mine? link!" in the critique section only or in your own blog.



thanks :)

Look at MINE!!!!!!!

I think the dog could use a nose, but otherwise, great!



Want to help me with something?

I'm a little bit busy, but when i have time, I'll improve it!

Thanks all comments!

Is he laying in his own piss?