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v1 Cwtch, current version








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Francesa
Francesa on Mar 08 '09
Cwtch - The Welsh word for a a hug, not just any hug, but the kind of comforting hug when you're really down. The kind of hug that makes you think maybe everything will be all right again.

With this hug (and a free kiss thrown in), you never need to be comfortless again.
notnorm
notnorm on Mar 08 '09
I think it looks better on the brown. I like your choice of colors in the art as well. I think that the scale and placement of the lips are off. Seems like the arms should be lower and the lips above them.



I would appreciate your opinion

Francesa
Francesa on Mar 08 '09
My version one (which I didn't submit), had the arms lower and the kiss above them. It ... uh...wouldn't have looked right on a woman.
Dreamstone_242
Dreamstone_242 on Mar 08 '09
I think the hand on the right, looks a little odd. Something about that bend throws it off.
RAD_Design
RAD_Design on Mar 08 '09
shadows maybe? underneath the hands?
Flatlandgamer
Flatlandgamer on Mar 09 '09
Very nice start :) I had a similar idea floating around too, but didn't really know how to put it onto a shirt...glad somebody is trying it! :)



Perhaps adding a bit of detail to the hands/arms so they don't look as flat? The lips look nice and round with the highlights, and then the arms seem flat to me.



Good start though, can't wait to see what you put up next!
Snoofalah
Snoofalah on Mar 09 '09
The left hand's thumbnails' a bit smaller than the other hand's, but it's really nice nonetheless. There's also a bit of a curve loss on the right hand, making it look a bit thicker than the left hand.
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Snoofalah
Snoofalah on Mar 11 '09
Also want to add that some of the lines are a bit thick, so maybe shaving some of it off could help, too.
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