My first attempt at a design. I used a pen and ink drawing I did and fit it onto the t-shirt. I thought it looked interesting so I wanted to see what others think. Any and all feedback is welcome!



Also, if you want other colors let me know. Title suggestions welcome too. I named it Zip It because I thought it ended up looking looking like a series of zippers (as if you couldn't guess that lol). It was really intended to be abstract though.



Thanks!

I like it, but Im not sure I like the color scheme

Very nice, but I don't see the concept exactly...

There's really no concept, it's just an abstract design.

turn the design so the open zipper is facing up



http://www.threadless.com/critique/3829/Sea_Dragon

Added some colors and a different shirt color. Let me know what you think!

I don't like how the edges of the unzipped zipper are not the same length.

I like the unmatching zipper heads

With the design turned as suggested.





I like the imbalance of it, but I could extended the top zipper to the top of the shirt perhaps?

Yea I think your previous design placement was better, just run the zipper up to the neck/shoulder.

It's too big; so big that it's barely recognisable as a zipper.

One zipper. Right shoulder to left lower side and show some skin under it. Just an idea I'd like to see.

Well, it's not supposed to be a zipper. As I said it's abstract. It just ended up looking like a zipper to me so that's what I named the shirt.



I'm working on another version in which the zipper extends.



I like that idea Sparra, maybe I'll try that too. Any suggestions on how to do skin though?

Version 4, with the "zipper" extended to the top.

It's just a bit....dull. Sorry. IMHO and all that.

New design based off suggestion by Sparra: http://www.threadless.com/critique/3893/Unzipped

it jus looks like were all pink...

Make it a hairy belly under the shirt. That will gross people out...hehhe!